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 Oct 5 2004, 07:58 PM
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I sat in bed, staring at the ceiling. My lifelong friend...had passed. What had happened to him? I was supposed to visit him on his birthday...we had the whole evening set up, we'd have a picnic under the stars. But, I wasn't able to make it...it seemed as if fate had wanted him away from me. I stared at the moon and quietly whispered to myself a prayer, " He'll be alright without you! You're staying home tonight...you've been hanging around him too much." My parents had scolded. When I went to his house the next day, I knocked on the door with a picnic basket in hand. The paramedics were there and had told me he had medical problems...I knew what he really died of..a broken heart.
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Oct 5 2004, 07:59 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
hmmm this reminds me of kingdom hearts too much.. not criticizing you.. but seems playjurized... anyways good one =P its cute
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Oct 5 2004, 08:01 PM
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ACK IT DOES? >< okay...i'll edit it! *pulls out eraser*
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Oct 5 2004, 08:02 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
did u play kingdom hearts? thats what kairi did... except it was a star not a heart so guess your off the hook =P
i still like it because i loved kingdom hearts =P |
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Oct 5 2004, 08:08 PM
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Ah...never played kingdom hearts....WOOT! I guess that means i could be a video game person...majigger...anyhoo...i rewrote the story...it may be worse but...VOILA!
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Oct 5 2004, 08:11 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
wow u should make movies or something because thats just freakin sad...
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Oct 5 2004, 08:14 PM
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WOOT! Thanks ^^ you made my day.
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Oct 5 2004, 08:15 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
hehe no thank you for participating in the writing section =P and keep up the good work
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Oct 5 2004, 08:17 PM
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Aha, okay thanks!
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Oct 6 2004, 10:27 AM
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 creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
i think there could be more but it was pretty interesting to read...i got confused until i read it a second time
 keep workin on the writing
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