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 Oct 3 2004, 11:25 AM
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SOS Brigade!!  Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775  |
I sit down alone in my corner not knowing what awaits me next. I tremble in fear for something is behind me. For now the only friend i can go to is the corner. I talk to it not knowing if i will get a response. I stare at it staring back at me with that cold dull paint look. I ask it to see whats behind me for i am afraid. It doesn't respond but I get a rush of fear. Closing me eyes and covering my face. From the back I feel the pain rushing through me. The pain that will never end and my only friend the corner just stares at my pain and just hears my scream. Without doing anything.
Enjoy =P |
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Oct 3 2004, 12:17 PM
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 Want fries with that? Group: Member Posts: 692 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,652 |
 Good job, i'm scared of corners now!
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Oct 3 2004, 04:11 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
::Scribbles down a note for himself::
QUOTE Why is it we writers like the concept of a corner? I myself have used the concept of the 'corner of my mind' in many instances of my work, and love the image. It's metaphorical significance is so emotionally relieving to utilize. To animate something that is so hard to explain, so hard to grasp. Why the big fascination? Do we find shelter in a corner? An open sanctuary, perhaps? What we feel like we're trapped up against when all around us has fallen apart? I think it's an easy tool for a writer to use - a corner. The possibility of so many meanings and representations, in whichever manner the writer chooses to use it as. I think that's enough of this. I'm just maniacally babbling now, and making little to no sense. ::Frowns at the note, crumples it up into a ball, and throws it away:: |
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Oct 3 2004, 09:54 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
keke this whole thing has a meaning to it.. its saying my corner is like my only friend and all he does is watch me as i go through pain
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Oct 3 2004, 11:25 PM
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Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Why're you stating the obvious?, LoL
It's pretty apparent to me though. Glad you wanted to explain your writing though. |
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Oct 3 2004, 11:25 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
because im cool like that... -_- thanks for making me feel S T U P I D =P
just because your good looking.. you bastard |
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Oct 3 2004, 11:28 PM
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Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Why the hell would you feel stupid? Well, that wasn't my intention at all.
Me? Good looking? Shush. 
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Oct 3 2004, 11:33 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
lolz +P i tend to state the obvious these days because of someone...
yeah u good looking bastard!! having mel.. YOU LUCKY BASTARD!!! |
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Oct 3 2004, 11:37 PM
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Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
I don't know about the good looking part, but yes, I am lucky to have Mel.
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Oct 3 2004, 11:40 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
u dam good looking biatch!! =P aww ur so sweet... -_-
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Oct 4 2004, 12:04 AM
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cb=bullshit. Group: Member Posts: 1,783 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,793 |
Aww, shucks! You boys! [puts hands on hips] Now you two cut that out!
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Oct 4 2004, 05:05 AM
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 Aww! ^___^ Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,645 |
Nicely done xD I like it. *Scoots away from the corners of my room and stays in the middle* Better xD
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Oct 4 2004, 08:53 AM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
QUOTE(omg_melface @ Oct 3 2004, 9:04 PM) Aww, shucks! You boys! [puts hands on hips] Now you two cut that out! yes ma'am T.T and foolish thanks for the comment |
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Oct 5 2004, 05:33 PM
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 don't worry, be happy~ Group: Member Posts: 1,538 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,899 |
that's awsome!!! yeah..... when i'm lonely or bored.... i THINK of talking to my shadow..... well, not really and not all the time.
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