Behind Blue Eyes, ...since there was such a demand =) |
Behind Blue Eyes, ...since there was such a demand =) |
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![]() Acoustic Surfer ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 195 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,912 ![]() |
Title: Behind Blue Eyes
Style: Emo Author: Joshua Schroeder //verse 1 Your books are scattered Out of anger And your makeup is a tragedy. The tears you cried Over sublime lies Streak your face like a sandy breeze. And you can't deny What they all know is true. You had your doubts, your chance to get out And he ended up hurting you... Hurting you... //chorus Don't try to trick yourself The mirror won't tell you lies. So give it a kiss and panic, But it won't ask the truth. And behind blue eyes Is the most beautiful part of you. //verse 2 It doesn't help to hide behind The wall you've built. No one ever got anywhere by Shutting people out. And all of your false pretenses Are hurting my head And your tears aren't uniform And their inconsistencies Of misery are immeasurable. //chorus repeat -Can also been read on my newly designed Xanga, along with some other works of mine. |
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its really nice
i wish i could write like that... i had something like that, but then i lost the ability to write beautiful sh*t |
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![]() Acoustic Surfer ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 195 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,912 ![]() |
whoo...Thanks for the reply mate...I've been watching this topic since I posted it expecting people to reply to it...getting kinda paranoid...I apperciate it :)
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*wind&fire* |
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ooooOOOoooohhhh i like it... but what tune is it?
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![]() Acoustic Surfer ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 195 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,912 ![]() |
If you listen to:
Dashboard Confessional-A Sharp Hint Of New Tears Thats the acoutistic guitar sound that I want with it, only mine is a little higher than that at times. |
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,989 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,691 ![]() |
Sounds good.
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