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Behind Blue Eyes, ...since there was such a demand =)
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post Oct 1 2004, 05:06 PM
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Title: Behind Blue Eyes
Style: Emo
Author: Joshua Schroeder


//verse 1
Your books are scattered
Out of anger
And your makeup is a tragedy.
The tears you cried
Over sublime lies
Streak your face like a sandy breeze.
And you can't deny
What they all know is true.
You had your doubts, your chance to get out
And he ended up hurting you...
Hurting you...

//chorus
Don't try to trick yourself
The mirror won't tell you lies.
So give it a kiss and panic,
But it won't ask the truth.
And behind blue eyes
Is the most beautiful part of you.

//verse 2
It doesn't help to hide behind
The wall you've built.
No one ever got anywhere by
Shutting people out.
And all of your false pretenses
Are hurting my head
And your tears aren't uniform
And their inconsistencies
Of misery are immeasurable.

//chorus repeat



-Can also been read on my newly designed Xanga, along with some other works of mine.
 
 
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deadflowers
post Oct 1 2004, 10:32 PM
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its really nice

i wish i could write like that... i had something like that, but then i lost the ability to write beautiful sh*t
 
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post Oct 1 2004, 10:48 PM
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whoo...Thanks for the reply mate...I've been watching this topic since I posted it expecting people to reply to it...getting kinda paranoid...I apperciate it :)
 
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post Oct 1 2004, 11:12 PM
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ooooOOOoooohhhh i like it... but what tune is it?
 
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post Oct 2 2004, 10:17 AM
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If you listen to:

Dashboard Confessional-A Sharp Hint Of New Tears

Thats the acoutistic guitar sound that I want with it, only mine is a little higher than that at times.
 
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post Oct 5 2004, 12:12 AM
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Sounds good.
 

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