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Poems, Can anyone write a good poem
dispn0ygonekrazy
post Sep 24 2004, 03:20 PM
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lolz well lets see im wondering if theres any good poets here in CB so umm yeah lets read them poems heres mine a love poem hope yall like it

we both sit next to each other in the still of the night
saying these words everything will be alright
the moon shined down on us there was a sparkle in your eye
it was tears falling down your face you started to cry
i held u tight to be next to you
telling the whole world how much i love you
u smiled back at me with that look on ur face
i told u baybee no one can ever take yur place
its hard for me to explain cuz i love u so much
but its that kinda love no one can touch
i promise someday it will be me and you
till then im always loving you
 
 
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dispn0ygonekrazy
post Sep 24 2004, 03:24 PM
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lol iight
 
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post Sep 24 2004, 04:12 PM
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Ermm.
Wow.
I suck at poetry. @_@
 
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post Sep 24 2004, 07:59 PM
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QUOTE(dispn0ygonekrazy @ Sep 24 2004, 3:20 PM)
lolz well lets see im wondering if theres any good poets here in CB so umm yeah lets read them poems heres mine a love poem hope yall like it

we both sit next to each other in the still of the night
saying these words everything will be alright
the moon shined down on us there was a sparkle in your eye
it was tears falling down your face you started to cry
i held u tight to be next to you
telling the whole world how much i love you
u smiled back at me with that look on ur face
i told u baybee no one can ever take yur place
its hard for me to explain cuz i love u so much
but its that kinda love no one can touch
i promise someday it will be me and you
till then im always loving you

omg thas sooo sweet....awww...maybe you can write one for me...haha laugh.gif
 
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post Sep 24 2004, 08:05 PM
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check the writing forum. there plenty poems in there wink.gif

moved to writing.
 

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