Grandpa's Song, A poem about my grandpa/leave comments |
 Sep 15 2004, 08:45 PM
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 babygrl23  Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911  |
The last time I saw him,
This moment I will never forget, When he walked into the bright light, And left me there to sit. I had never thought about life without him, Until he could no longer hold me, In the end I cried as hard as I could, But I was still upset. I then saw him in a dream, He said he was sorry he had to leave me, But he had to go sometime, He only wished it would have been when I was older. He said he was sorry he couldn't watch me grow up, He would have wanted to, I know he would be so proud, And I too wish he could see me. He made my four years great ones, Although I can't explain why, But not only was he my great grandfather, He was my best friend. |
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Sep 16 2004, 05:29 PM
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babygrl23 Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911 |
ok, I know this is spamming...but come on! Somebody must have SOME comments
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Sep 17 2004, 01:30 PM
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 creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
i like this one alot!
 good job
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Sep 19 2004, 01:36 PM
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 Look its... Group: Official Member Posts: 5,817 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,767 |
you just gotta be patient, but i love it. its so sweet. it reminds me of my mom =)
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Sep 25 2004, 12:51 PM
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babygrl23 Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911 |
Yeah, I'm not very patient...lol. What happened to your mom, if you dont mind me asking.
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Sep 25 2004, 01:11 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
awww im late on this one too geez lol ay i like ur poems very touching TWO THUMBS UP
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Sep 26 2004, 08:36 PM
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babygrl23 Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911 |
thanks! =)
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