Stare, Please read this... |
 Sep 7 2004, 04:28 PM
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 Crying Behind Blind Eyes  Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967  |
Stare
By: Savannah Harrison A tranquil, yet bitter stare, Watching the faces around her. The world as if gagging, Poisoned by such mephitical fumes. Each lie she hears from flushed lips, She finds herself lavishly consumed. Each honeyed word of praise, She loses herself in ersatz kisses. Suspended between cerulean blue eyes, And voluptuous fantasies of better times. She finds that every single tantalizing touch, Masks the true form of excruciating pain. Heart-break and shattered dreams, Is found to be painfully ensued. Lugubrous tears cannot be hidden, But by the radiant horizon. In the stars she finds herself, Immersed in unintended passerbys. Her unabridged life is like the moon, Always changing, never true. |
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Sep 7 2004, 06:33 PM
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 The voices talk too much... -.-u Group: Member Posts: 2,099 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 39,078 |
I'm guessing you wrote it?
^_^u -can't say what she wants to- Erm.... Nice work..... -doesn't really even know what it's about- |
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Sep 7 2004, 09:38 PM
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Crying Behind Blind Eyes Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967 |
I wrote it.
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Sep 8 2004, 11:23 AM
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Newbie Group: Member Posts: 8 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 44,373 |
QUOTE(C.Lime.Jello. @ Sep 7 2004, 6:33 PM) I'm guessing you wrote it? ^_^u -can't say what she wants to- Erm.... Nice work..... -doesn't really even know what it's about- what's your problem? anyway, I love your poems. keep them coming. |
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Sep 8 2004, 12:10 PM
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 i'm lala. girly girl. Group: Member Posts: 1,531 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 31,888 |
that's nice...it's deep...how did it insipre you
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