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 Sep 3 2004, 10:49 AM
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 Kermit the frog = <3  Group: Member Posts: 2,315 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,215  |
I was bored.. so I decided to write up a poem.. so how is it.. and yes, I know it's short.
with your hands on my hips, my cheek on your lips, I venture for the truth.. I hold on through and through.. our love caressing. I've grown before your eyes let me be, let us live. |
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Sep 3 2004, 01:04 PM
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 creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
very sensual and lovely i think :)
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Sep 4 2004, 01:26 AM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
Ooh. =D I like that a lot.
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Sep 6 2004, 05:12 PM
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Kermit the frog = <3 Group: Member Posts: 2,315 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,215 |
any other comments?
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Sep 6 2004, 05:15 PM
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 The voices talk too much... -.-u Group: Member Posts: 2,099 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 39,078 |
^_^u
-can't say what she wants to say- Very nice, I like it. |
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Sep 6 2004, 11:24 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,384 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 37,337 |
lool short but sweet.
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Sep 8 2004, 11:21 AM
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Newbie Group: Member Posts: 8 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 44,373 |
it's lovely
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