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Whats it like?
Devastation
post Aug 30 2004, 09:11 PM
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Everyday, i hope and pray
that i can find the one
that will always make my day
no matter how i feel
no matter what happens
i wanna be love

whats it like to be love?
which everyone speaks of
why cant someone love me
thats really all i wanted
but i know it wasnt meant to be

whats it like?
to have your girl next to you
being along your side
always saying things that are true
why cant i find that girl

everyday i find something to change
changed my personality, and put away my childish games
like my attitude, i know i shouldnt be rude
no im sensative and secure
i dont know what to ask more
somebody show me whats it like
whats it like to be in love.

i've been hoping
ever since my heart has been open
if love could roll my way
i know it hasnt yet
but i still count the days
until i find the girl i need to be thinking of
but until then the question still is
whats it like to be in love?
 
 
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angel-roh
post Aug 31 2004, 06:01 AM
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awwww that poem is so cute and sweet! it's like ur trying to find a girl to be by your side 24/7 that you even changed your personality to get ready to have a relationship, but u just cant find one... i dont know if ur feeling this now, but hope u find one! it's sucha cute poem. i'll give u 10/10^^
 
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post Aug 31 2004, 11:55 AM
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Thats a nice poem... I'd tell you what its like, but for me to put my feelings into words would be a crime because nothing can describe it... Its just that great. Anyways great poem and keep it up
 
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post Aug 31 2004, 12:29 PM
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great poem its a poem a lot of ppl can relate to hope u keep writing like that and just wait when u least suspect it that right person will come ur way!
 
sporadic
post Aug 31 2004, 04:54 PM
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Awe.. I know exactly what you mean..
But you don't have to change.
You're perfect.
 
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post Aug 31 2004, 08:10 PM
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Aww, that's such a sweet poem, Andrew. =-]
I really like it.
Awesome job!
 
justchillen
post Sep 4 2004, 11:25 PM
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aw i so know what your going thru..its like everyone else is in "love" but you! and i think ive figured it out that..maybe your not ready for love even when you think/know soo hard that you are.. you never find love when your looking for it=) so im just waiting..waiting.....
 

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