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seeing for the very first time..., a little poem i wrote
curi0usbr0wneyes
post Aug 20 2004, 05:33 PM
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seeing for the very first time

the once warm embrace of friendship had deserted me
in its stead was a hard, cold slap to reality
i hated their
sickening pity,
fake smiles,
and
all the f**ked up lies they fed me
i was so blind,
that i didn't see the goddamn conspiracy
I trusted them
And they turned their backs to me
i was blind then
but now i see.
 
 
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angel-roh
post Aug 23 2004, 01:00 AM
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omg......u cussed too much--_--;; but i get wat ur saying... and i hate when that happens... u trusted them but then they turn their backs to u...if this was real for u.... hope u feel better-_-
 
curi0usbr0wneyes
post Aug 23 2004, 04:01 PM
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i didnt cuss that much....but anyways, i've had a couple of friends who've stabbed me in the back and i was so mad that i came up with this poem...
 
sporadic
post Aug 23 2004, 04:10 PM
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and they say imitation is flattering
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Wow.

Friends in a conspiracy against you.
 
curi0usbr0wneyes
post Aug 23 2004, 04:48 PM
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LOL! well it seemed as if they were all against me...
 

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