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 Aug 14 2004, 01:24 PM
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 [p][E][r][F][e][C][T][L][y] [i][N][S][a][N][e]  Group: Member Posts: 35 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,206  |
She hides her scars, hides her wounds..
it shall be always her eyes that tell the deepest truths.. Her wounds she never shows.. all the sorrows that inside she holds.. Her pretty exterior will never show... No one would ever guess All the things she has to confess.. All the things she's gone through, will never be told, for it's her eyes that tell the deepest truths.. [[I know I don't rhyme much... but it's not bout rhyming really.. I just had to write it out.. hope u enjoy. To0dles.]] - The Lee |
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Aug 14 2004, 01:27 PM
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 freedom Group: Member Posts: 844 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 31,358 |
 Wow! That is so nice! Great job!
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Aug 14 2004, 01:28 PM
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[p][E][r][F][e][C][T][L][y] [i][N][S][a][N][e] Group: Member Posts: 35 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,206 |
Lol thanks.. I LOVE STEWIE GRIFFIN MANN! lol. He's the greatest.
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Aug 15 2004, 12:18 PM
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 Your love is a razorblade kiss ♥ Group: Member Posts: 1,794 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 9,959 |
*claps*
i lyk it! itz MY type of poem 
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Aug 15 2004, 03:39 PM
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 dizzy me up. Group: Member Posts: 3,191 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,139 |
its really deeep
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Aug 16 2004, 04:24 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,384 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 37,337 |
duzn't matter if it duzn't rhyme, im not all that much of a rhymer myself.
nice poem tho!! |
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Aug 16 2004, 05:36 AM
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 and they say imitation is flattering Group: Member Posts: 1,337 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,269 |
Very deep.
Screw rhyming. There are people I know who write poems that have 24 lines of non-rhyming [poem]with random rhyming words tossed in there. Don't stain my forte with your botched and unimpressive writing. *cough* But your poem was very good. |
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Aug 23 2004, 10:31 PM
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Yeah, the poem you've written is very deep..
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Aug 27 2004, 10:21 PM
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i love this poem! it says a lot of things that i can relate to......
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Aug 28 2004, 10:36 AM
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Good job.
 I like it a lot. 
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Dec 27 2005, 01:40 AM
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I gave you everything ... Group: Member Posts: 81 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 334,433 |
really nice
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Dec 27 2005, 03:27 AM
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tats deep.
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Dec 27 2005, 03:37 AM
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give it up for the deep man, alright. =]
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Dec 27 2005, 09:39 AM
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Wow. That's deep. *appluase*
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Dec 27 2005, 01:23 PM
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 I'll be your Rock N Roll Queen Group: Member Posts: 68 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 324,951 |
You don't need to rhy to make great potery
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Dec 27 2005, 02:09 PM
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 Dark Lord of McCandless Group: Member Posts: 2,226 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,761 |
What the hell, it doesn't even rhyme!
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Dec 28 2005, 09:57 AM
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 My desperate heart is far too weak to run for you this long. Group: Member Posts: 640 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 150,342 |
^^^ "free writing" my friend.
I love it I would have said it's very deep but I think you've heard that one too many times. Hehe. I like....QUOTE for it's her eyes that tell the deepest truths.. Very nice. |
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Dec 29 2005, 03:15 PM
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 =] Group: Member Posts: 1,910 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 156,614 |
QUOTE(sheepy @ Aug 15 2004, 4:39 PM) its really deeep ^yep |
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Dec 29 2005, 03:16 PM
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Absolute art. Wonderfully written
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