Nature of the lost |
 Aug 14 2004, 06:35 AM
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 Bardic Nation  Group: Member Posts: 1,113 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,059  |
The Nature of the Lost
It once flourished under the sun- Basking in where once there was one- Feeling free to roam as it willed- But soon there wasn't much left to be killed- Rivers run dry- forests burn down- And a wave of bye to that ancient town- Successful demolition- Through the ambition of greed- a bead of sweat falls onto this silhouette- destruction of the lost- fencing for the cost- all the years of a life of labor only to be tossed, aside- and for those who lied- casting a blind eye- to those children that died- to think you never even tried- The bonafied lie of those who hide- behind there money and power- Try to cower in the shadows- The curse of man that everyone had chose- polluted snows blow in the wind- polluted souls go into the end- |
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Aug 14 2004, 06:35 AM
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Bardic Nation Group: Member Posts: 1,113 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,059 |
if you want more go to my xanga and go into the past, like next five. They get better i promise. ok so what? are u guys speechless?
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Aug 17 2004, 04:35 AM
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 Darlin dont u know? The water is poisoned Group: Member Posts: 554 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,668 |
makes me feel like im tarzan
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Aug 17 2004, 01:14 PM
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 Ah, mon Dieu ! Group: Member Posts: 2,274 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,587 |
QUOTE(Stupid_Fat_Boy @ Aug 17 2004, 4:35 AM) makes me feel like im tarzan lol |
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Aug 18 2004, 02:50 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,384 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 37,337 |
QUOTE(Stupid_Fat_Boy @ Aug 17 2004, 4:35 AM) makes me feel like im tarzan lol... nd yea im kinda speechless lmfao |
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Aug 22 2004, 08:34 PM
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Bardic Nation Group: Member Posts: 1,113 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,059 |
im confuzed
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Aug 23 2004, 12:31 AM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
tarzan? hahahahahahaha why tarzan? lol nooo i dont think so... i got confused in the 2nd to the last part...hehe but the first one i get, but good description
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Aug 23 2004, 01:32 AM
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Bardic Nation Group: Member Posts: 1,113 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,059 |
thanx but i dont get tarzan?
this poem got me nominated for poet of the year in the international society of poets. |
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Sep 19 2004, 02:21 AM
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Bardic Nation Group: Member Posts: 1,113 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,059 |
you guys have no taste in poetry if this doesn't get more than a tarzan comment.
DOES EVERYTHING HAVE TO BE ABOUT LOVE? if you ask me, it stinks. |
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