freaky poem..., it came to mind! |
 Aug 13 2004, 09:03 PM
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 i noticed your gangster, im pretty gangster myself  Group: Member Posts: 85 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 31,180  |
just again do i feel touch
do i feel my heart beat again even though crimson sin runs rampid along these tiled floors of secrets and shame i question my entirety and see that this sin had drenched my perception as i breathe my last breath i smile a little inside |
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Aug 13 2004, 09:27 PM
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 who again? Group: Member Posts: 555 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 31,458 |
QUOTE(delightfullyinsane @ Aug 13 2004, 9:03 PM) just again do i feel touch do i feel my heart beat again even though crimson sin runs rampid along these tiled floors of secrets and shame i question my entirety and see that this sin had drenched my perception as i breathe my last breath i smile a little inside nice emotion, just maybe alittle too much? lol |
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Aug 13 2004, 09:29 PM
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 I like it better when it hurts Group: Member Posts: 47 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,730 |
QUOTE(delightfullyinsane @ Aug 13 2004, 10:03 PM) just again do i feel touch do i feel my heart beat again even though crimson sin runs rampid along these tiled floors of secrets and shame i question my entirety and see that this sin had drenched my perception as i breathe my last breath i smile a little inside I think its a good poem...very interesting also very sad. |
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Aug 18 2004, 02:40 AM
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very good poem. it almost feels like the author is reincarnated or sumfin
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