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Devastation
post Aug 11 2004, 03:13 PM
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who again?
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who are you?
dont care
whats your name?
dont stare

bother me?
i think not
do you know me?
thats what i thought

dont you know?
im not you
i talk alot?
i dont copy everything you do

i dont want to be like you
stop tryin to change me
dont try, its not working
im not going to be like you cant you see?

you cheat, steal, and abuse
i dont want who you are
think again
im different from you by far.
 
 
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F1R3B4T
post Aug 11 2004, 07:11 PM
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hey ncie poem. has a touch of dr. seuss in it. kool
 
slurp
post Aug 13 2004, 07:30 PM
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hey that kinda relates to the quote " often imitated but never duplicated " somewhat? anyways nice poem _smile.gif
 
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post Aug 13 2004, 10:25 PM
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Ooh, I like this one.. a lot.
Great job, Andrew! wub.gif
 
sweetdreamsx3
post Aug 23 2004, 10:31 PM
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Aaahhh, interesting title for the poem! I'm loving it! :D
 

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