what do you think......., is it goood? |
 Aug 4 2004, 01:50 PM
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what do you think of this poem i wrote for this special person
TODAY I SAW A GIRL WOW SHE IS BEAUTIFUL I GOT TO KNOW HER NAME AND WE BECAME GOOD FRIENDS BUT .... SOMETHING HAPPEN ..... BEAUTIFUL I SAW U TODAY I WAS STANDING NEXT TO YOU ... I WAS JUST THINKING AT THAT MOMENT I WANTED TO SAY HI TO U BUT SOMETHING MADE ME BACK OFF BEAUTIFUL I SAW YOU TODAY JUST AS BEFORE, STANDING NEXT TO YOU THINKING BOY I WISH I COULD HOLD YOUR HAND BEAUTIFUL I SAW YOU TODAY AGAIN. I WAS STANDING NEXT TO YOU YET IT FELT LIKE I WAS A BILLION MILES AWAY FROM YOU, WISHING I COULD JUST GRAB YOU AND HOLD YOU TIGHT IN MY ARMS BEAUTIFUL I SAW YOU TODAY BUT THIS TIME I FELT LIKE I JUST WANTED TO KISS YOU AND HOLD YOU FOR EVA IN MY ARMS BEAUTIFUL TODAY I SAW YOU AGAIN LOOKING BEAUTIFUL THAN EVA LIKE YOU ALWAYS DO, TODAY IS DIFFERENT SOMETHING SO SPECIAL I THOUGHT I COULDNT OF KNOWN WHAT IT IS AT THIS YOUNG AGE BUT I CAME REALIZE I WANTED TO LET YOU KNOW THAT I HAVE FALLEN FOR YOU NOT A DAY THAT PAST THAT I DONT LOOK AT YOUR BEAUTIFUL FACE OR HEAR YOUR SWEET VOICE EVERY DAY THAT PAST MY LOVE FOR YOU GROWS AND GROWS AND MY LOVE FOR YOU BEAUTIFUL WILL NEVA STOP GROWING YOU HAVE TRIPED ME AND I HAVE FALLEN FOR YOU GIRL .:tony:. |
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Aug 4 2004, 02:12 PM
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 something more Group: Member Posts: 2,468 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,808 |
wow! Very nice!
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Aug 7 2004, 12:14 PM
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 dizzy me up. Group: Member Posts: 3,191 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,139 |
very unique nd nice !
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Sep 3 2004, 10:52 AM
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 Kermit the frog = <3 Group: Member Posts: 2,315 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,215 |
aww that's adorable.
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Sep 3 2004, 01:41 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 866 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 35,809 |
wow thats really good!
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Sep 3 2004, 02:47 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,384 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 37,337 |
lol nice.... ehh does it have to be in caps tho?
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