"you don't know me" |
 Jul 30 2004, 06:57 PM
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Brie  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548  |
Okay. I wrote this poem for a poetry slam in school this year.. I got chosen to read mine at the slam. I came in 2nd place. So, yeah. This poem kinda sucks..
"You Don't Know Me" I am not who you think I am, I'm not one of you, I'm not one of them. Why do you judge me? and Why do you label me? You just don't understand me, You don't know the real me. I doubt you know me for real, and you absolutely don't know how I feel You think I have no problems, but that is where you are wrong. As I sit here...alone..all alone.., I'm thinking about you, and only you. I think about you day and night, I bet you didn't realize that. I don't know how I got this way, it's most likely because of you. I sure hope you realize, that I'm not who you think I am. You don't know me. |
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Aug 7 2004, 12:20 PM
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 dizzy me up. Group: Member Posts: 3,191 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,139 |
wow very unique , like the message too!
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Aug 7 2004, 02:27 PM
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 Ah, mon Dieu ! Group: Member Posts: 2,274 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,587 |
i like this
 nice job |
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Aug 7 2004, 09:25 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,384 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 37,337 |
hey, i like that poem! lol good job! u deserved that prize for poetry slam!!
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Aug 23 2004, 10:35 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 5,585 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,082 |
Awesome!!! Do you mind if I post this in my xanga? lol I found two good poems so far. :D
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Aug 28 2004, 09:34 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 875 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,841 |
wow, that poem relates to how i feel right now..nice poem
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Aug 28 2004, 09:36 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
QUOTE Awesome!!! Do you mind if I post this in my xanga? lol I found two good poems so far. :D Nope! I don't care. Hah, I'm flattered! XD |
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