Blend with the Dust |
 Jul 29 2004, 11:38 PM
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If I could just melt away
Blend with the dust Never say a word again Never care Nor lose a friend Blank I stare Noting left Faking life My fingers deft I am of those who live But nothing more Left to give Not keeping score Emptiness it's All I've got My life is not Worth the loss Untie the knot |
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Jul 30 2004, 11:23 AM
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 TheQuietThingsNoOneEverKnows Group: Member Posts: 75 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 35,721 |
 i like it!
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Jul 30 2004, 06:12 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
Ooh!
I like that! =-] Nice. 
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Jul 30 2004, 06:38 PM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,025 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,051 |
why thank you
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Jul 31 2004, 03:58 AM
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 Aww! ^___^ Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,645 |
I like it but I didn't much get the "Untie the Knot" part, maybe change that part?
Bleh, don't listen to me, lol. -hEaRt <3 |
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Jul 31 2004, 03:58 AM
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 We are the cure. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,936 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,456 |
I like it, it's really original.
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Jul 31 2004, 08:55 AM
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ooo thats nice xD
-Courtney |
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Jul 31 2004, 11:08 AM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,025 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,051 |
thanks guys
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