"Overdosing On All The Wrong Things", by Warren Elfrank |
 Jul 23 2004, 12:37 PM
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 photoshopless  Group: Member Posts: 24 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 31,702  |
“Overdosing On All The Wrong Things”
She said give me time And I’ll paint you the world Let me breathe, and you’ll see Step off the bridge and join me (I said) Its windy up here and Confusion just blew my way This bridge might be my exit But it looks lovely where you are This has to be easier Heartache was not prescribed I think I’m overdosing Pump my stomach my love Rid me of this pain I’ve taken it all too far -Warren Elfrank |
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Jul 26 2004, 02:17 AM
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photoshopless Group: Member Posts: 24 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 31,702 |
thanks
I wrote those lyrics and now its an acoustic song I'll be preforming the song Wednesday at an open mic night. |
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Jul 27 2004, 02:11 PM
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 ¤ i havent been here much ¤ Group: Member Posts: 133 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 34,018 |
wow
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Jul 27 2004, 02:13 PM
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hm....um...uh...k? Group: Member Posts: 371 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,424 |
...very good...lyk ur poem..cuz all poems dont have to rhyme..lyk urs....nice job
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Jul 27 2004, 06:30 PM
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very pretty
good luck with omNight 
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