Birthday invite |
Resource Center Links
This Month's Contests | Hosts Looking for Hostees | Hostees looking for Hosts | BigBookofResources
Submission Guidelines
 Aug 28 2010, 09:20 PM
Post
#1
|
|
 Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll  Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480  |
So a friend of my family asked if I wouldn't mind doing the invites for her kids birthday party, and since this is one of the very few kids I don't hate I said sure.
Her last name isn't snow face. I just call her that (her parents are Mexican/black and she's a snow face. I also sometimes call her commie because she is adopted from Russia) and I didn't want to post her last name lulz edit: edit 2: edit 3: They gave me a photo to reference of her dressed as a fairy, and that's how she is standing in the photo but I might bring her hands upfront because they kind are bugging me. Most likely will redo the feet too. Rockwell? yes/no? idk c&c |
|
|
|
 |
Replies
(1 - 18)
|
Aug 28 2010, 09:34 PM
Post
#2
|
|
 Onen i-Estel Edain, ú-chebin estel anim. Group: Official Designer Posts: 425 Joined: May 2008 Member No: 653,128 |
It looks really cute and awesome
|
|
|
|
|
Aug 28 2010, 10:56 PM
Post
#3
|
|
 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
That's so precious!
I'm not sure about the eyes and the center of the flowers, though. Everything else is super soft and those parts are really dark. The feet and hands look fine to me. |
|
|
|
|
Aug 29 2010, 01:45 AM
Post
#4
|
|
|
Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
made the eyes/flowers a little lighter. Also made the dress less poofy
|
|
|
|
|
Aug 29 2010, 03:58 AM
Post
#5
|
|
 Live long and prosper. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,142 Joined: Apr 2007 Member No: 514,926 |
Her feet look like hoofs... I agree with the hands being brought to the front, at least make it look like she wants to welcome her guests. There should be a comma after Saturday. Kern the spacing for 2p and 7p, they should be the same. If you put periods in one acronym you should put them in the other, "R.S.V.P.". If this is gonna be printed, be sure to make your background lighter. Rockwell is a fine typeface for the project, Personally I would pick museo.
|
|
|
|
|
Aug 29 2010, 09:53 PM
Post
#6
|
|
|
Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
forgot to kern though
|
|
|
|
|
Aug 29 2010, 10:02 PM
Post
#7
|
|
 Photoartist Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,363 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 399,390 |
i'd go to this goddamn party even if there wasn't weed and alcohol naw mean
it's good |
|
|
|
|
Aug 29 2010, 10:05 PM
Post
#8
|
|
|
Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
The parents are black and hispanic. Of course there's going to be weed and beer.
The kid will end up with at least 3 dime bags by the end of the night |
|
|
|
|
Aug 29 2010, 10:07 PM
Post
#9
|
|
 Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,020 Joined: May 2008 Member No: 653,768 |
man hispanic & black if they had any biological kids they'd be too lazy to steal
|
|
|
|
|
Aug 29 2010, 10:07 PM
Post
#10
|
|
|
Photoartist Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,363 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 399,390 |
well i hope that address is real cause i'm crashing this mother f*cker
|
|
|
|
|
Aug 29 2010, 10:34 PM
Post
#11
|
|
 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
It looks pretty nice. I'm not too sure about the green, though. It feels a bit too of an "icky" green rather than a soft green.
 Also, you should be ashamed. Look what you've just openly given to Tung. 
|
|
|
|
|
Aug 30 2010, 03:04 PM
Post
#12
|
|
 사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
Looks cute. The beige colours blend in with the green a little too much, imo.
|
|
|
|
|
Aug 30 2010, 04:27 PM
Post
#13
|
|
 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
This is so freaking cute! jfsdbfknbdjf. I agree with Gabrielle though.
|
|
|
|
|
Aug 30 2010, 07:41 PM
Post
#14
|
|
|
Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
|
|
|
|
|
Aug 30 2010, 07:48 PM
Post
#15
|
|
 Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,155 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 95,404 |
Haha, you didn't want to put her last name, but was totally alright with revealing her address?
 I think it's absolutely adorable! I would have loved an invitation like this as a kid. The change to blue was a good choice... I think it fits the whole fairy thing more than the green. |
|
|
|
|
Aug 30 2010, 08:06 PM
Post
#16
|
|
|
Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
ahaha. I just typed in random stuff for the address. Thanks
|
|
|
|
|
Aug 30 2010, 08:40 PM
Post
#17
|
|
|
Photoartist Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,363 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 399,390 |
lol yeah i saw that 1337 ness
|
|
|
|
|
Aug 30 2010, 11:50 PM
Post
#18
|
|
|
Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,155 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 95,404 |
Nice.
|
|
|
|
|
Aug 31 2010, 12:46 AM
Post
#19
|
|
 Senior Member Group: Head Staff Posts: 18,173 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 108,478 |
Cute~ The original was pretty good to begin with, and the final edit is great. I like the shade of blue you picked for the background.
|
|
|
|
 |
1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members: