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just something i wrote to my ex.., tell me if u like it..
lilconfusedbabii...
post Jul 21 2004, 04:31 AM
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i sat on teh corner one lonely night,
shuddering cold under the bright moon light
my thoughts wandered as i started to cry,
as the slightest thought of u brings tears to my eyes...
"I will love you always" was what u had said,
but is that truly wut u had meant?
u said there wasnt enough trust,
and ended our love...

but i knew there was more..

u called a girl u knew and asked her out,
thinking I would never find out,
but damn u were wrong,
and now im glad ur gone-

because that girl's my best friend..

so is that why you were so suprised,
wen i said that i knew 'nancy' and looked u in the eye?
so u thought u would break up with me,
before the truth spread to me?

well i will never trust u again,
f*ck waht i said..
it dont mean sh*t now..
f*ck all those presents
might as well throw em out
f*ck all those kisses
they feelin me jacked...
f*ck u you h* i dont want u back



sorry that was really long and had ' eamon- dont want u back' at the end, but lol i send that poem to him... and yeah.
 
 
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Foolish Heart
post Jul 21 2004, 06:11 AM
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Aww! ^___^
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GURL! YOU SHOULDNT HAVE SENT IT TO HIM! HE MIGHT THINK THAT EVEN THOUGH YOU SAID YOU HATE HIM OR DONT LIKE HIM NO MORE..HIS GONNA THINK.."OH THIS GIRL MADE A POEM FOR ME, SHE STILL PROBABLY CARE ABOUT ME"...EHH YEAH..
 
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post Jul 21 2004, 01:19 PM
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this is kinda like a letter..... the last part came from a song...
 
Mireh
post Jul 21 2004, 01:30 PM
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Uhm, why would you write to your ex ?
 
kyuubi319
post Jul 21 2004, 10:07 PM
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oh my god, i did the same thing to my ex a while ago, [including the eamon part] and he was like, oh my god, she still loves me, and then we got back together. but then the poo:pooh: head cheated on me and we broke up, but now im wid someone else, but it was funny, biggrin.gif "

neways, that was a mad good poem dudee. [i dunno if you shoulda sent it dudee]

mucho love

xOxO sAnDy XoXo
 

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