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creole
post Feb 19 2010, 09:30 PM
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i don't need help with coding. all i need is just feedback from you guys. i'm mostly looking for things i should add/remove, change, etc.

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Mikeplyts
post Feb 19 2010, 09:38 PM
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The background seems to clash and doesn't at all match with the content colors. The orange bar is annoying, and the dark blue to solid black gradient with serifs text on top of the orange bar is even more annoying. Also, bad consistency with text (serifs text, sans-serif text, choppy text don't go well together) and colors (bright, vibrant background colors, dark colors on a header, soft colors in images, and gross, solid blue links). >_> Additionally, you could at least spice up the contact table a bit.

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post Feb 20 2010, 12:44 PM
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QUOTE(Mikeplyts @ Feb 19 2010, 09:38 PM) *
The background seems to clash and doesn't at all match with the content colors. The orange bar is annoying, and the dark blue to solid black gradient with serifs text on top of the orange bar is even more annoying. Also, bad consistency with text (serifs text, sans-serif text, choppy text don't go well together) and colors (bright, vibrant background colors, dark colors on a header, soft colors in images, and gross, solid blue links). >_> Additionally, you could at least spice up the contact table a bit.

To be honest, not your best.


wat he said, deff fix that clashing background though

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creole
post Feb 20 2010, 02:46 PM
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what do you guys think about just a solid color background? how about gradient?
 
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post Feb 20 2010, 07:27 PM
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I think the background is cute but the bright blue/violet color doesn't match. it needs to be more patsel like the others.
 
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post Feb 21 2010, 05:20 PM
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I pretty much agree with Mike on everything. I mean I wouldn't mind the background it's just that the colors are really bright and clashing.
 

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