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poems, by me!!!
truluvis4eva
post Jul 18 2004, 05:40 PM
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Jst Leave Now

i can understnad

u don wanna b by my side

thats ok..

jst leave

get out ofmylife

get out of my head

i cant stop

thinkin bout u

so jst leave

get out

leave me alone

stop haunting me

im dying here

without u ll

be worse..

but its better

then sitting here

watching u with my frends

so leave

and let me die

softly


next one...

How Do I Say Bye

u look as if u don care

i try to look that way

but i cant

tears are welling up in my eyes

and also in my heart

my heart is beating so loud

maybe not beating at all

no wonder

i cant breathe

but how do u look so calm

do u care that little bout me?

i gave my life for u..

but now

*goodbye*

next one

U Don Even Noe

my heart broke

jst to b with u

i let my soul go

i lost my evertyhing

but i don think

u understand

i love u

is it so hard?

my heart broke

all for u and

and u don even noe

u don even care

i think...

but how should

i noe

when u never

even talk to me

or look at me

life's jst not fair

and u think

all my frends

are really great

jst wait till

u see wat they did

to me...

all for u

i lost my everything

im traped by myself here

this lonley feeling

will never go....

and u don even noe its u...

so i have to

let u go

out of my life...

jst say good bye...

... at least

well.. thatsit ..hhmmm.. poems dont hab to rhyme do they?
 
 
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ghjgfkgfk
post Jul 18 2004, 06:34 PM
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poems dont have to rhyme. i think poems are better when they dont rhyme.

anyway, i really think the seocond is the best <3 thumbsup.gif throb.gif
 
bibliomania
post Jul 21 2004, 02:27 PM
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Poems don't have to rhyme. Not at all! :-D
 

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