Laceration, Poem about a cutter. |
 Jul 15 2004, 09:00 PM
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 Crying Behind Blind Eyes  Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967  |
Another sucky poem...even worse than my last...
Laceration By: Savannah The blade is cold, Against my warm, soft flesh. I push the knife harder, Tearing shallowly into the skin. I allow my blood to drip, Bit by bit... Slow and soft at first. Then deeper the cuts tear, Leaving to be abysmal scars. The cruor pours now, Thick and red. I make a sea of crimson, I drench the ground in blood. I close my eyes, Tilt back my head. Dark shadows flicker, Covering my very existence. In this time, Lost deep inside my pain. I feel free, Now I feel true. In these moments, I can breathe again. Only now as I cause, The wound that plagues my body. I have realized something, Truly...my life is but a mere laceration. ---------------------------- cruor \Cru"or\ (kr?"?r), n. [L., blood. See Crude.] The coloring matter of the blood; the clotted portion of coagulated blood, containing the coloring matter; gore. ---------------------------- lac·er·a·tion ( P ) Pronunciation Key (ls-rshn) n. A jagged wound or cut. ---------------------------- a·bys·mal ( P ) Pronunciation Key (-bzml) adj. Resembling an abyss in depth; unfathomable. Very profound; limitless: abysmal misery. Very bad: an abysmal performance. |
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Jul 16 2004, 12:18 AM
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 LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
QUOTE(Sa-Chan @ Jul 15 2004, 9:00 PM) ---------------------------- cruor \Cru"or\ (kr?"?r), n. [L., blood. See Crude.] The coloring matter of the blood; the clotted portion of coagulated blood, containing the coloring matter; gore. ---------------------------- lac·er·a·tion ( P ) Pronunciation Key (ls-rshn) n. A jagged wound or cut. ---------------------------- a·bys·mal ( P ) Pronunciation Key (-bzml) adj. Resembling an abyss in depth; unfathomable. Very profound; limitless: abysmal misery. Very bad: an abysmal performance. took my advide, i see.  it ain't bad. i'd like it better if had rhythm and if it rhymed, but it ain't bad. as long as you like it. |
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Jul 16 2004, 12:23 AM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
ack! stupid thing. sorry to double post.
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