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Suicide Music, Do It Up
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post Jan 4 2010, 08:17 PM
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Feedback on what to do, need help with this one


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post Jan 4 2010, 08:51 PM
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I don't like the font. And I think you could have done more inside the Polaroid instead of leaving it solid black.
 
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post Jan 4 2010, 08:56 PM
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QUOTE(Beenly @ Jan 4 2010, 08:51 PM) *
I don't like the font. And I think you could have done more inside the Polaroid instead of leaving it solid black.



what font do you suggest and what else should be in the polaroid?

Let me know

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post Jan 4 2010, 09:25 PM
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Try to think of font that isn't too distracting--more simple is where I'm aiming towards.


And what should be in the Polaroid...is you and me. JK LOL.


Seriously though, the Polaroid should be something related to the theme. Try to find gory images or abnormal images and mess around.
 
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post Jan 4 2010, 09:33 PM
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I don't like either of the fonts you used. Sticking with the general design you have, try Downcome or Dirty Ego for where it says "Suicide Music." Stylize to your desired look if necessary.

For "The Official EP," something more simple. I don't really have any suggestions for that though.
 
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post Jan 4 2010, 09:47 PM
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I honestly like this out of all of your work, you have a really cool horrorcorish mixtape style.
I do agree with the font thing though.
I'd suggest Kreepy Krawly or Plague Death but thats just thinking of ones that would go with it, so i dont know if it'd be good.
 
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post Jan 4 2010, 10:09 PM
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QUOTE(Tramatize @ Jan 4 2010, 09:47 PM) *
I honestly like this out of all of your work, you have a really cool horrorcorish mixtape style.
I do agree with the font thing though.
I'd suggest Kreepy Krawly or Plague Death but thats just thinking of ones that would go with it, so i dont know if it'd be good.



thank you guys edit 2 is up now for some fonts wacko.gif

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post Jan 5 2010, 02:35 AM
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QUOTE(Beenly @ Jan 4 2010, 06:25 PM) *
Try to think of font that isn't too distracting--more simple is where I'm aiming towards.
And what should be in the Polaroid...is you and me. JK LOL.
Seriously though, the Polaroid should be something related to the theme. Try to find gory images or abnormal images and mess around.

HAHA damn Beenly, you really do hit on every guy on cB.


I like your edit more. The photo you used is eye catching and a lot better than the font you used in the first version. Do you have the unedited version of the photo, btw?
 
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post Jan 5 2010, 12:39 PM
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QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ Jan 5 2010, 02:35 AM) *
HAHA damn Beenly, you really do hit on every guy on cB.
I like your edit more. The photo you used is eye catching and a lot better than the font you used in the first version. Do you have the unedited version of the photo, btw?



thanks alot now i need ideas for text placement, then i can try out some of those fonts you guys were talking about

help me out

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post Jan 5 2010, 01:40 PM
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nice job
Reason for edit: Stick on topic, not member bash. >_< - Beenly
 
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post Jan 5 2010, 05:33 PM
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QUOTE(serotonin @ Jan 5 2010, 01:40 PM) *
nice job



why thank serotonin . . . your so nice shifty.gif



Good looks Beenly


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post Jan 8 2010, 03:20 AM
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so can you guys suggest where to place these fonts so i can finish this lol

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