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Jan 4 2010, 08:17 PM
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Feedback on what to do, need help with this one EDIT 2: Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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Jan 4 2010, 08:51 PM
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 |
I don't like the font. And I think you could have done more inside the Polaroid instead of leaving it solid black.
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Jan 4 2010, 08:56 PM
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Jan 4 2010, 09:25 PM
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 |
Try to think of font that isn't too distracting--more simple is where I'm aiming towards.
And what should be in the Polaroid...is you and me. JK LOL. Seriously though, the Polaroid should be something related to the theme. Try to find gory images or abnormal images and mess around. |
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Jan 4 2010, 09:33 PM
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![]() /人◕‿‿◕人\ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 8,283 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 602,927 |
I don't like either of the fonts you used. Sticking with the general design you have, try Downcome or Dirty Ego for where it says "Suicide Music." Stylize to your desired look if necessary.
For "The Official EP," something more simple. I don't really have any suggestions for that though. |
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Jan 4 2010, 09:47 PM
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 1,288 Joined: Oct 2007 Member No: 585,380 |
I honestly like this out of all of your work, you have a really cool horrorcorish mixtape style.
I do agree with the font thing though. I'd suggest Kreepy Krawly or Plague Death but thats just thinking of ones that would go with it, so i dont know if it'd be good. |
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Jan 4 2010, 10:09 PM
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913 |
I honestly like this out of all of your work, you have a really cool horrorcorish mixtape style. I do agree with the font thing though. I'd suggest Kreepy Krawly or Plague Death but thats just thinking of ones that would go with it, so i dont know if it'd be good. thank you guys edit 2 is up now for some fonts Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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Jan 5 2010, 02:35 AM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
Try to think of font that isn't too distracting--more simple is where I'm aiming towards. And what should be in the Polaroid...is you and me. JK LOL. Seriously though, the Polaroid should be something related to the theme. Try to find gory images or abnormal images and mess around. HAHA damn Beenly, you really do hit on every guy on cB. I like your edit more. The photo you used is eye catching and a lot better than the font you used in the first version. Do you have the unedited version of the photo, btw? |
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Jan 5 2010, 12:39 PM
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913 |
HAHA damn Beenly, you really do hit on every guy on cB. I like your edit more. The photo you used is eye catching and a lot better than the font you used in the first version. Do you have the unedited version of the photo, btw? thanks alot now i need ideas for text placement, then i can try out some of those fonts you guys were talking about help me out Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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Jan 5 2010, 01:40 PM
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,020 Joined: May 2008 Member No: 653,768 |
nice job
Reason for edit: Stick on topic, not member bash. >_< - Beenly
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Jan 5 2010, 05:33 PM
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913 |
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Jan 8 2010, 03:20 AM
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913 |
so can you guys suggest where to place these fonts so i can finish this lol
Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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