Forever 2 The Official EP, And so it continues .... Options

[deteam]

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Critique please

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Link to Forever The Album: http://www.createblog.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=244531

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Subliminal

[Eww]

you could make the guy look creepier.
i think the dirtiness on him kinda take a lot away, and you can do better. like you can't really see some of his features well. maybe give him a scar instead of coating him with dirt.
if you made the 2 in his eye look like it was part of his eye/pupil, that would look neat
this could look sharp, i think

[deteam]

you could make the guy look creepier.
i think the dirtiness on him kinda take a lot away, and you can do better. like you can't really see some of his features well. maybe give him a scar instead of coating him with dirt.
if you made the 2 in his eye look like it was part of his eye/pupil, that would look neat
this could look sharp, i think

and how would i go about making that "2" blend in more with the eye/pupil?

and ya ill work on some scarring . . and it was purposely done not 2 see some features

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Subliminal

[Eww]

umm maybe you could take a pupil/iris (i don't know)
and then make it in the shape of a two? i think if it looked realistic it might look pretty cool.

[none345678]

I think if you are going to go with a more macabre feel then the text should match. The inner shadow and the font face in general doesn't go with it. If you insist on having a more clean cut font like that then grunge it up.

The 2 just looks bad altogether. There is really no need for it.

[jiyong]

I think you should either remove the 2 in the eye altogether and just have a red iris, or have the red iris and have the two overlay the iris/pupil. I prefer not having it at all, though. I'm leaning towards Abbey's opinion.

[manny-the-dino]

Looks cool. If you really want to use the "2" you could always mess with the Free Transform settings. I think there's a warp mode setting or something like that. I suggest you use that to give it some shape.

[deteam]

I think if you are going to go with a more macabre feel then the text should match. The inner shadow and the font face in general doesn't go with it. If you insist on having a more clean cut font like that then grunge it up.

The 2 just looks bad altogether. There is really no need for it.

ite so remove the 2 . . . red iris/pupil

and to grunge it up just throw some grunge brushes on it ?

should i also remove the inner shadow, then grunge it ?

or keep both>?

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[creole]

why does ur pic remind me of this? LOL