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![]() Amberific. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,913 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,772 ![]() |
Okay, so after much griping, and much delay, I've completed my portfolio's redesign! Check it out and tell me what you think:
http://oeuvre.elletricity.com/oeuvre.htm |
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![]() 사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 ![]() |
I LIKE IT
![]() I think you should make "Oeuvre" and "A Portfolio" each a different color, so they stand out from each other more. |
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![]() crushed. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,432 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,026 ![]() |
this is lovely carrie! i agree with gabrielle, and just one minor spelling thing: the word "create" is spelled wrong in the definition next to vector/vexel.
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![]() Amberific. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,913 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,772 ![]() |
^ Thanks for catching that typo, Teesa.
And thanks to both of you for the kind regards! =D |
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 ![]() |
I second Gabrielle's response. But this is so good. I love it. I also like how you put the definitions because a lot of people would be like "
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![]() Amberific. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,913 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,772 ![]() |
You know what I just noticed? It looks like shit in IE. I hate IE. I should have that as a disclaimer: don't look at my work if you're still on IE.
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![]() Live long and prosper. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,142 Joined: Apr 2007 Member No: 514,926 ![]() |
May I see a preview of the before?
Right now, I'm not sure how the rounded navigation compliments the sharp corners. |
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![]() DDR \\ I'm Dee :) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Mentor Posts: 8,662 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 384,020 ![]() |
I really like the colors you used. I'm not a big fan of how small the navigation is compared to the content text, but that just might be a personal taste thing.
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![]() Treasure Pleasure ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Head Staff Posts: 11,193 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 281,127 ![]() |
I'm with Dee about the text. Looks good though. It's simple and straightforward. I'm assuming your IE hate is due to the rounded corners not matching up with the content? Try adding <br clear="all" /> after the top rounded corner image so it looks like this:
CODE <img src="images/white-navi.png" width="750" height="27" border="0" usemap="#Map"><br clear="all" /> For the About page, do the same for both images so they look like this: CODE <img src="images//white-navi.png" width="750" height="27" border="0" usemap="#Map"><br clear="all" /> CODE <img src="images//rounded-bottom.png" width="750" height="8"><br clear="all" /> You did the footer differently on the Contact page, so it's a bit more complicated. Just replace it with the way you did it on the About page, then do the whole <br clear="all" /> thing for both images again. You also need to nest the Submit button in a row then add a final <br clear="all" style="line-height:0px;" /> after the closing <form> tag. In the end, it should all look like this: CODE <!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01 Transitional//EN"> <html> <head> <title>Oeuvre | A Portfolio: Carrie Epps</title> <meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=iso-8859-1"> <link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="text.css"/> <script type="text/javascript" src="lightbox/js/prototype.js"></script> <script type="text/javascript" src="lightbox/js/scriptaculous.js"></script> <script type='text/javascript' src="lightbox/js/lightbox.js"></script> <link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="lightbox/css/lightbox.css"> </head> <body bgcolor="#EFEEE4"> <table cellspacing="5" cellpadding="0" class="index" align="center"> <tr> <td><span class="title">Oeuvre </span> <span class="titlecaption">A Portfolio </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td><img src="images//white-navi.png" width="750" height="27" border="0" usemap="#Map"><br clear="all" /> <div style="background-color:#ffffff; padding-left:15px; padding-right:15px;"> <span class="subtitle">Contact</span><br> <p>To inquire about my services, please fill out the form below.</p> <form method="post" action="contact.php"> <fieldset style="border: 0px;"> <table width="50%" border="0" cellspacing="3" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td><label for="name">Name:</label></td> <td><input type="text" id="name" name="name" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td><label for="email">E-mail:</label></td> <td><input type="text" id="email" name="email" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td><label for="topic">Subject:</label></td> <td><input type="text" id="topic" name="topic" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td><label for="comments">Message:</label></td> <td><textarea id="comments" name="comments" rows="5" cols="30"></textarea></td> </tr> <tr> <td><button type="submit">Send</button></td> </tr> </table> </fieldset> </form><br clear="all" style="line-height:0px;" /> </div> <img src="images//rounded-bottom.png" width="750" height="8"><br clear="all" /> </td> </tr> <tr><td><div align="center">©2009 Carrie Epps</div></td></tr> </table> <map name="Map"> <area shape="rect" coords="335,2,383,18" href="contact.htm"> <area shape="rect" coords="40,2,99,18" href="oeuvre.htm"> <area shape="rect" coords="190,2,238,18" href="about.htm"> </map> </body> </html> I might have missed something but yeah, hope that helps. Sorry about the long post. |
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![]() Amberific. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,913 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,772 ![]() |
May I see a preview of the before? I took down the other test sites, but I'm sure I have a screencap floating around somewhere. I'll post it later.Right now, I'm not sure how the rounded navigation compliments the sharp corners. I'm with Dee about the text. Looks good though. It's simple and straightforward. I'm assuming your IE hate is due to the rounded corners not matching up with the content? Try adding <br clear="all" /> after the top rounded corner image so it looks like this: I did the contact page differently because the form was messing everything up. Thanks for the tip!
CODE <img src="images/white-navi.png" width="750" height="27" border="0" usemap="#Map"><br clear="all" /> For the About page, do the same for both images so they look like this: CODE <img src="images//white-navi.png" width="750" height="27" border="0" usemap="#Map"><br clear="all" /> CODE <img src="images//rounded-bottom.png" width="750" height="8"><br clear="all" /> You did the footer differently on the Contact page, so it's a bit more complicated. Just replace it with the way you did it on the About page, then do the whole <br clear="all" /> thing for both images again. You also need to nest the Submit button in a row then add a final <br clear="all" style="line-height:0px;" /> after the closing <form> tag. In the end, it should all look like this: CODE <!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01 Transitional//EN"> <html> <head> <title>Oeuvre | A Portfolio: Carrie Epps</title> <meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=iso-8859-1"> <link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="text.css"/> <script type="text/javascript" src="lightbox/js/prototype.js"></script> <script type="text/javascript" src="lightbox/js/scriptaculous.js"></script> <script type='text/javascript' src="lightbox/js/lightbox.js"></script> <link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="lightbox/css/lightbox.css"> </head> <body bgcolor="#EFEEE4"> <table cellspacing="5" cellpadding="0" class="index" align="center"> <tr> <td><span class="title">Oeuvre </span> <span class="titlecaption">A Portfolio </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td><img src="images//white-navi.png" width="750" height="27" border="0" usemap="#Map"><br clear="all" /> <div style="background-color:#ffffff; padding-left:15px; padding-right:15px;"> <span class="subtitle">Contact</span><br> <p>To inquire about my services, please fill out the form below.</p> <form method="post" action="contact.php"> <fieldset style="border: 0px;"> <table width="50%" border="0" cellspacing="3" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td><label for="name">Name:</label></td> <td><input type="text" id="name" name="name" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td><label for="email">E-mail:</label></td> <td><input type="text" id="email" name="email" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td><label for="topic">Subject:</label></td> <td><input type="text" id="topic" name="topic" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td><label for="comments">Message:</label></td> <td><textarea id="comments" name="comments" rows="5" cols="30"></textarea></td> </tr> <tr> <td><button type="submit">Send</button></td> </tr> </table> </fieldset> </form><br clear="all" style="line-height:0px;" /> </div> <img src="images//rounded-bottom.png" width="750" height="8"><br clear="all" /> </td> </tr> <tr><td><div align="center">©2009 Carrie Epps</div></td></tr> </table> <map name="Map"> <area shape="rect" coords="335,2,383,18" href="contact.htm"> <area shape="rect" coords="40,2,99,18" href="oeuvre.htm"> <area shape="rect" coords="190,2,238,18" href="about.htm"> </map> </body> </html> I might have missed something but yeah, hope that helps. Sorry about the long post. |
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 ![]() |
I like it. Simple but nice. I dont like the nac though. I think it should be seperated and use something fancy. your portfolio is your chance to go crazy so this is a little to plain i guess... and there is no need to credit lightbox by the way.
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