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Just another sad poem... read!!!
WendyLynn182
post Jul 12 2004, 11:19 PM
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I'm so alone there's no one here
I clos emy eyes and disappear
My world goes quiet and fades to black
It is too late I can't go back
I remember all those nights alone
Stayed up late sitting by the phone
All I wanted was just one call
Too bad it never came at all
Will anyone notice that I'm gone?
Is what I have done really so wrong?
I couldn't deal with all the pain
Another would have drove me insane
 
 
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WendyLynn182
post Jul 12 2004, 11:23 PM
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Crud I screwed up..........


***Another DAY would have drove me insane.


I can't type at all. My apologies.
 
lilsammie13
post Jul 12 2004, 11:24 PM
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it onli hurts wen i breathe
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thats g0oOd! ;] u got talentt!! keep on writingg!
 
seriouslynikki
post Jul 14 2004, 02:59 PM
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man...ur gifted!!!!! I love this poem!!! It relates to me and my life!
 
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post Jul 16 2004, 12:44 AM
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ohh gosh no
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thats good. Can be related too in some ways for me but yea. its good. Keep writing. everyone likes reading.
 
EmeraldKnight
post Jul 16 2004, 12:45 AM
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Wow that's depressing.. very well written too.. I think we can all relate to that in some way..
 
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post Jul 19 2004, 10:44 PM
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mellow.gif ....its like you know me...

-Phil-
 
winks03
post Jul 20 2004, 02:00 AM
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good job biggrin.gif !! i reallly like your work...keep it comin biggrin.gif
 
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post Jul 20 2004, 09:55 AM
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thats pretty good. next time if u made a mistake, u can just edit ur post.
 
vietspirit
post Jul 20 2004, 10:38 AM
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wow. you're really good at writing poems. keep it up! biggrin.gif
 
bibliomania
post Jul 21 2004, 02:42 PM
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You should read The Phone Call by Dorothy Parker.

Nice poem! Good work. Don't worry about the typos... you can fix it! :-D
 
sheepy
post Jul 21 2004, 09:16 PM
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dizzy me up.
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o wow i dink its really good nd deep _smile.gif
 
BeautifulSoul
post Aug 9 2004, 01:27 PM
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Great poem! You've got talent so use it.
 
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post Aug 9 2004, 02:07 PM
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wow so much talent
i cud neva do stuff like that
good job!!
 
sweetdreamsx3
post Aug 23 2004, 10:34 PM
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QUOTE(seriouslynikki @ Jul 14 2004, 2:59 PM)
It relates to me and my life!

Says it all!
 
lhuvhurts
post Aug 24 2004, 12:37 AM
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thats good
 

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