Song Lyrics, In the form of a poem |
 Jun 21 2009, 04:18 PM
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Newbie  Group: Member Posts: 3 Joined: Jun 2009 Member No: 733,809  |
Heya,
I write lyrics for my band's songs - call me a songwriter if you will. I've been looking at some of the content here and I have to say it's very good :) I've been tempted into posting some of my stuff up too. This is the soft acoustic introduction to one of our tracks - it's not long... CODE Can you hear their call? Without you They won’t be dead at all, The drum pounds out the sound Insipid yet Still buried in the ground We slowly slip away Pray And on our knees we stay Rectify the wrong It’s too late The justice is long gone… What do you think? -Delta |
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Jul 10 2009, 08:20 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 |
hi dr. Seuss,
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Jul 29 2009, 09:26 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
i like the rhyme scheme and the format. you should post up more.
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