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Man On The Moon [Feedback PLEASE], Piece I Started that I Need Feedback On |
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913 ![]() |
![]() Leave some feedback on what to fix or what do add Thanks Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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![]() Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 ![]() |
I already posted this before at my forums, but I still think the "glare" in his glasses look strange, like eyeballs. I think you should probally try using a soft brush and just paint around that area with a black-ish color. Idk how to really fix that. Otherwise, nice job!
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Woah this looks really cool but I agree with Mike (Mikeplyts). Although honestly, I didn't notice that until he pointed it out. It's great though!
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thanks a lot guys, i actually didn't notice it until he pointed it out lol . . now 4 some tips on how 2 fix that
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![]() kthxbai ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203 ![]() |
Did you make his eyes huge on purpose?
Also, this really has absolutely nothing to do with a moon... (maybe I'm being too literal? You could easily add a moon somewhere .. it would match the title better). |
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Did you make his eyes huge on purpose? Also, this really has absolutely nothing to do with a moon... (maybe I'm being too literal? You could easily add a moon somewhere .. it would match the title better). no those were actually on the render to begin with . . and the moon metaphor is just because he makes like spacey futuristic music, which is why i put him in like a space background . . . planets kinda look like moons ![]() Stay Up -1- Subliminal |
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913 ![]() |
so ne other feed? lol
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