Third Website Template! |
Resource Center Links
This Month's Contests | Hosts Looking for Hostees | Hostees looking for Hosts | BigBookofResources
Submission Guidelines
 May 27 2009, 05:52 PM
Post
#1
|
|
 Funride.org  Group: Member Posts: 326 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 542,299  |
This is a huge improvment. I think.
It took hours to make, between desinging and coding. Take a look and tell me what you think! I also used not to bright colors like people told me to! http://i39.tinypic.com/14kh7o6.png |
|
|
|
 |
Replies
(1 - 7)
|
May 27 2009, 06:05 PM
Post
#2
|
|
 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
It's still not so good. The way you used the black and white in this one is pretty boring. The X's are kind of annoying and the content areas are really plain and too small. The "Welcome" text isn't great either and you're still trying to use a grungy font when the layout itself doesn't seem to be grungy. To be honest, your second template is better and this one isn't at all any better. Good try though.
|
|
|
|
|
May 27 2009, 06:45 PM
Post
#3
|
|
 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
No bright colors doesn't necessarily mean you have to go black and white. I personally think website layouts should have some sort of color in them. It's a bit more inviting, you know? You just have to pick ones that aren't as saturated.
It's still not the best, but I think it's better than your second one. This one looks a lot cleaner. |
|
|
|
|
May 27 2009, 07:11 PM
Post
#4
|
|
 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
Yeah you need some colors. I feel colorblind looking at this. I think it's better and more organized for sure. And the blending's pretty trippy. Which is good.
|
|
|
|
|
May 27 2009, 09:22 PM
Post
#5
|
|
|
Funride.org Group: Member Posts: 326 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 542,299 |
Thanks guys!
Uhh, I'm thanking about changing the two big X's a different color. And this took forever to make! |
|
|
|
|
May 27 2009, 10:43 PM
Post
#6
|
|
 Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 |
a. It's not centered.
b. You really shouldn't use a div for a website. c. its too black and white. I think you should have kept the coding of the other one but changed image. |
|
|
|
|
May 27 2009, 11:57 PM
Post
#7
|
|
 Adobe Addict Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,237 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 113,043 |
I'd like to offer one thing of advice - try to be more detail oriented with the placement and size of your scrolling content. Some of the scrollbar overlaps the light gray content area - try to adjust minutely to make it look a little cleaner and well-thought out.
A definite improvement from your last 2! Keep up the good work. I can see improvements already - you're a quick study, aren't you? It took me forever to get design principles down. |
|
|
|
|
May 28 2009, 02:10 PM
Post
#8
|
|
|
Funride.org Group: Member Posts: 326 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 542,299 |
QUOTE(digitalfragrance @ May 27 2009, 11:57 PM)  I'd like to offer one thing of advice - try to be more detail oriented with the placement and size of your scrolling content. Some of the scrollbar overlaps the light gray content area - try to adjust minutely to make it look a little cleaner and well-thought out. A definite improvement from your last 2! Keep up the good work. I can see improvements already - you're a quick study, aren't you? It took me forever to get design principles down. Thank you so much! I guess I am a little. ;) |
|
|
|
 |
1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members: