Unlike California, Read if you'd like to :). |
 Jul 9 2004, 01:14 PM
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Unlike California
These fortelling blue waves scream silently Emancipating what can't be understood. Its depths hold the the mystery that seems hidden But they know it is seen. It is clearly blue, seen with such perception Of what the future holds. Knowing what happens next, Destroys the ruines of destiny. Fate had been held back. The heat of the sun can only blaze, Protection has been revealed. For even something with such light, Turns opposites into darkness. Jealousy lines the shore. Seeing what hate brings, Currupts a sense of believing. A tall mountain which can't be conveyed, Nor seen. This gun forever points to my head, And these bittersweet memories aren't held back. Such a beautiful state, Destroyed in a state of mind. My life was to take, beautiful are the waves, Bright was the sun, now covered in shadows. Unlike California I could never feel alive, I was trapped in your lies, And now I can only drift away. comments??____xx |
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Jul 9 2004, 03:57 PM
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 Kermit the frog = <3 Group: Member Posts: 2,315 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,215 |
wow.. big vocab.
 lol. nicely written. |
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Jul 9 2004, 04:42 PM
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 dizzy me up. Group: Member Posts: 3,191 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,139 |
i like it =]
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Jul 9 2004, 08:28 PM
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 off the wall dork Group: Member Posts: 470 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 19,070 |
its very good... i like the last couple of lines...awesome
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