I Waited, Semi-Sad Love Poem |
 Jul 9 2004, 11:22 AM
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 Crying Behind Blind Eyes  Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967  |
I was inspired to write a love poem for some reason. It's sadder than I originally planned it to be. I got the idea of the dock from Final Fantasy 9 with the whole love letter crisis o_O.
glaˇciˇate ( P ) Pronunciation Key (glsh-t, -s-) tr.v. glaˇciˇatˇed, glaˇciˇatˇing, glaˇciˇates To cover with ice or a glacier. To subject to or affect by glacial action. To freeze. So ya'll don't have to look up what glaciate means if you don't know. I was meaning it as the term "To freeze" as I bolded above o_O. I Waited By: Savannah (Me) I waited for you, darling. As the sky wore the moon. I waited for you, darling. On the dock where I met you. I waited for you, darling. Near an ocean of icy blue. I'm waiting for you now, darling. Under a sky of darkened hue. I'm waiting for you now, darling. But you've not yet come. I'm waiting for you now, darling. As my heart begins to glaciate. I'll wait for you forever, darling. Come find me...If you dare. I'll wait for you forever, darling. Because true love never ends. I'll wait for you forever, darling. Simply because I want to be with you... |
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Jul 9 2004, 12:01 PM
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 Kermit the frog = <3 Group: Member Posts: 2,315 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,215 |
I love that poem.. it expresses how I feel..
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Jul 9 2004, 12:52 PM
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Crying Behind Blind Eyes Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967 |
QUOTE(x3_kelly @ Jul 9 2004, 12:01 PM) I love that poem.. it expresses how I feel.. I'm glad you like my poem, but I'm sorry you have to feel that way. I know what it's like. |
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Jul 9 2004, 01:21 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,795 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,421 |
Wow.... that was beautiful.. you've such a talent with words..
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Jul 9 2004, 01:33 PM
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Crying Behind Blind Eyes Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967 |
QUOTE(EmeraldKnight @ Jul 9 2004, 1:21 PM) Wow.... that was beautiful.. you've such a talent with words.. Thank you very much, I was afraid it wouldn't be any good ^_^ I haven't written poems for awhile, till today. I was hit by a need to write poems. |
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Jul 9 2004, 09:25 PM
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 dizzy me up. Group: Member Posts: 3,191 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,139 |
wow really good.. it sorta expresses how i feel .
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Jul 10 2004, 08:06 AM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
hehe it reminds me one of my lyrics i wrote.. "waiting for you" hehe but neat poem^^;; it's like u're not got turn baq until he comes to u^^
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Jul 10 2004, 10:26 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 2,520 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 200 |
oh wow that was really awesome.. :)
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