THe Craziest Thing, a poem of mine... |
 Jul 6 2004, 12:23 AM
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umm... this is just one of my poems ive written... its not great i know but any comments would be appreciated ^^
The Craziest Thing Sometimes you got to wonder why we do the crazy things we do deceiving, betraying, destroying just to name a few But I have to say that to love is the worst nothing can make you cry so much or make your heart want to burst You'll spend endless nights wondering what you did wrong or knowing it will never be and that you've wasted your time for so long Trust me on this I swear it's all true I learned my lessons the hard way the day I fell for you. |
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Jul 6 2004, 07:42 PM
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Oh wow, that's really good.
*Applauds* 
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Jul 6 2004, 07:52 PM
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 it onli hurts wen i breathe Group: Member Posts: 77 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 28,197 |
oo i like it! ;] .. i like the last verse the best .. idk why .. but g0od jOb.
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Jul 6 2004, 08:40 PM
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 Future Mr. Kelly Clarkson Group: Member Posts: 1,268 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,552 |
o my
that was so good and i can totally relate 2 that poem |
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Jul 6 2004, 09:24 PM
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 tomorrow is a new day Group: Member Posts: 41 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,956 |
its great i like the last stanza
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Jul 7 2004, 01:37 AM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
that poem relates to my past feelings. i did the most craziest things but didnt reallie know the exact thing that i did. i did something that i spent my endless night alone, crying. aww u did a nice, sad poem there! great job!
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Jul 9 2004, 09:57 AM
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I am Sandy. Hear me roar. Group: Member Posts: 1,152 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,896 |
i love you poem, i can deffinitely relate to it, especially the last four lines
keep up the good work xOxO sAnDy XoXo |
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Jul 9 2004, 10:18 AM
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 Pimp Status Group: Member Posts: 640 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,200 |
WOOTAGE...Nice poem buddy... Keep em comin
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Jul 9 2004, 09:25 PM
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 dizzy me up. Group: Member Posts: 3,191 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,139 |
wow really nice.. it even rhymes !
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Jul 10 2004, 01:54 AM
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 1'm h3r3! h0ll4! Group: Member Posts: 185 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,207 |
thatz a very good poem dat you wrote...keep it goin
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Jul 10 2004, 01:56 AM
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 i`m tOo secksie fOr mai shirt Group: Member Posts: 129 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 28,650 |
i luv your poem! heh writing is like...awesome...
sometimes its better than speaking |
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Jul 10 2004, 04:19 AM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 18 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 28,231 |
hey dat was a good poem and u shud come chek minez out titled "PROBLEMS" and i was tryin ta hav a response to ur poem but i sorta got carried away lol enjoy
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Jul 12 2004, 12:58 AM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 18 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,950 |
thank yoos for all the wonderful comments!!!
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Jul 12 2004, 05:10 PM
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 Paid da coss 2 B da boss Group: Member Posts: 28 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,914 |
Thats suicidal writing it gorgeous i love it
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