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 Jul 4 2004, 11:55 PM
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grrowl  Group: Member Posts: 393 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,727  |
not really a poem.. i think i just had to express my self..
 its the first time i felt like a helpless kid, the first time i felt trashed, the first time i felt alone, the first time i waited for santa.. but no one came.. the first time i had sleepovers without someone lecturing me and being overprotective, the first time i havent been camping for at least ONCE this summer, the first time i havent felt the snow freeze my hands in the snow this winter, the first time i had no one to kiss every morning and night, the first time no one came in my room and calmed me when i was scared, the first time i had no one to stay up late for new years with, the first time he had never came and asked what i want for my birthday, the first time no one ever cuddled me and called me "my little princess", first time i could only see my dad once 2 months i never imagined it would be this way.. i never imagined i would have "first times".. i never imagined about crying everyday for the first time without a shoulder to lean on, its been a first time ever since you left. i miss you dad 
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Jul 4 2004, 11:58 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,795 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,421 |
Aww... that's so sad..
 did that realli happen? I'm sorrie if it did..It may not have been intended to be a poem, but it sounded realli good.. |
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Jul 5 2004, 12:02 AM
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grrowl Group: Member Posts: 393 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,727 |
QUOTE(EmeraldKnight @ Jul 4 2004, 11:58 PM) Aww... that's so sad.. did that realli happen? I'm sorrie if it did..It may not have been intended to be a poem, but it sounded realli good.. yes im having a "First time" right now.. i'm seeing the fireworks aloen right from my window.. its depressing since im not used to seeing it alone.. i used to always go out with my dad on our fold up chairs and watch it all night.. expecially on new years..
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Jul 5 2004, 12:04 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,795 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,421 |
QUOTE yes im having a "First time" right now.. i'm seeing the fireworks aloen right from my window.. its depressing since im not used to seeing it alone.. i used to always go out with my dad on our fold up chairs and watch it all night.. expecially on new years.. Aww... I'm so sorrie  I'm not exactly sure what I can do to help, but if you need someone to talk to, just PM me.. I realli hope you feel better |
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Jul 5 2004, 01:16 AM
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 i`m in love & always will be Group: Member Posts: 1,138 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 12,769 |
Im so sorry.. i know how hard it is to loose someone
great poem though.. good way of expressing how u feel |
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Jul 5 2004, 01:29 AM
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 s a r a h r o s e <3 Group: Member Posts: 575 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 12,944 |
thaz so sad- im sorry
im glad you expressed yourself you must feel better now and i hope you get better |
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Jul 7 2004, 01:57 AM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
awww yeah it's not a poem, but it's expressing ur feelings...all everythings a first time and the last one, ur first time seeing ur dad leaves...awwww!!!!!!!!! i'll be damn sad if my dad leaves me... aww hope he comes baq! heres a flower
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Jul 7 2004, 02:43 AM
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 Look its... Group: Official Member Posts: 5,817 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,767 |
aww thats sad. and its ok. you can still call it a poem. a free style poem =)
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Jul 7 2004, 03:35 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 271 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 19,766 |
awss...=(
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Jul 9 2004, 04:47 PM
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 dizzy me up. Group: Member Posts: 3,191 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,139 |
aw
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Jul 10 2004, 11:46 AM
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 Kermit the frog = <3 Group: Member Posts: 2,315 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,215 |
awwww.. sniffles*
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