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 Apr 17 2009, 10:37 PM
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 Amberific.  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,913 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,772  |
Working on this banner for my internship:
What do you think? Edit: Trying to work out some kinks. |
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Apr 17 2009, 10:38 PM
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Very clean, I can see it being used :)
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Apr 17 2009, 10:40 PM
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Amberific. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,913 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,772 |
^ Yeah, me too! The whole thing irks me, honestly, but I don't know how to make it better without losing its commercial appeal.
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Apr 17 2009, 10:42 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
I like it. It's very nice.
QUOTE(A1Bassline @ Apr 17 2009, 08:38 PM)  I like the setup a lot, there is just something about the top text that is irking me, I don't know what it is though. But it looks good to me.  QUOTE(hi-C @ Apr 17 2009, 08:40 PM) ^ Yeah, me too! The whole thing irks me, honestly, but I don't know how to make it better without losing its commercial appeal. Maybe it's the hot pink you used as the font color. Iono. |
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Apr 17 2009, 10:53 PM
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Amberific. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,913 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,772 |
No, the background doesn't clip off the flower, that was me cropping the image. What if I just took out that entire lower flower? And yeah, I agree about the alignment of the "shop now..." text.
Edit: Updated. Check the first post. |
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Apr 19 2009, 06:41 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Head Staff Posts: 18,173 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 108,478 |
The edited version looks good. It might look better if the top of the flower didn't touch the "T" above it, but maybe that's just me.
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Apr 19 2009, 10:41 PM
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I like it. :]
Though the font is nice, I think you could maybe use a different sans-serif font for the title. I don't think it would break font consistency too much. Oh and also, maybe lighten the pink background by like 5%? |
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Apr 19 2009, 10:59 PM
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Amberific. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,913 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,772 |
^ What would you recommend? And since this is for commercial use, it can't be anything found on dafont, fontfreak, etc.
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Apr 20 2009, 12:14 AM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,815 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 423,396 |
QUOTE(hi-C @ Apr 19 2009, 08:59 PM) ^ What would you recommend? And since this is for commercial use, it can't be anything found on dafont, fontfreak, etc. Hm, aren't there fonts on DaFont that say like "Free for commercial use"? Sorry if I'm wrong. |
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Apr 20 2009, 06:05 AM
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Amberific. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,913 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,772 |
There are some, but I'm not looking through them.
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