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 Apr 17 2009, 01:10 AM
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What do you guys think of this?
Im not done with it but I wanted some feedback.  Thanks  A newer one:  A newer-er one: 
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Apr 17 2009, 01:30 AM
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 Wow that's hot.Tbh, I don't really think the area with the circles are god well. It looks random to me. I like the blending section better. Also you have some "Rolling Stone" watermarks at the bottom. It's cute though. :) |
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Apr 17 2009, 05:04 PM
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I really like the right part but the left is just...a mess, IMO. Also, the edges of the text look a bit choppy.
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Apr 17 2009, 05:58 PM
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 poison Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
Agree with the left how it looks messy. But overall really good job
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Apr 17 2009, 06:05 PM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
Yeah, I like the right side better than the left. The left is a bit messy so you should clean that up. Also, I think the girl that Thomas is talking about is the one with a thumb in her mouth, lol. Otherwise, great job.
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Apr 17 2009, 10:41 PM
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The right looks good but the left is...no. Too much bubbles and they're plain, if you added some text/brush/textures whatever and made them look better and take out some of them it would look way better.
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Apr 17 2009, 11:06 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 944 Joined: Jul 2008 Member No: 663,413 |
Thanks for all the feedback! I made a new one. What do you think of it?
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Apr 17 2009, 11:13 PM
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Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
I'm not really feeling the thick black border, tbh; it makes them looked crammed. And I like the text effect you did in your first version instead of the black text as well.
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Apr 17 2009, 11:14 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 944 Joined: Jul 2008 Member No: 663,413 |
I love borders, but no one here seems to like them Lol. Okay, Ill fix those two.
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Apr 17 2009, 11:24 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 944 Joined: Jul 2008 Member No: 663,413 |
^ Ya, I know, they are so choppy. It took me forever to blend these pictures and I think I just got really lazy at the end. Ill go and fix them.
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Apr 18 2009, 03:50 AM
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I kind of liked it with the left side. I thought it gave a little something compared to what it looks like without it. Maybe if you kept the left side and made it less crowded? i dont know, just a thought.
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Apr 18 2009, 10:00 AM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
^Yeah, I agree. Like maybe tone down on the circles or something. It just kind of looks plain now...
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