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 Mar 14 2009, 09:12 PM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots.  Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291  |
Not sure if this really turned out good but I tried it out anyways. A simple bitten apple that I tried to vector.
 C&C would be nice.  Thanks.
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Mar 14 2009, 09:22 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
QUOTE(divergent @ Mar 14 2009, 09:18 PM)  Kinda blurry around the edges, overall good job. Yeah, I tried to smooth the edges with a mask but it looks like I forgot to sharpen around the edges and all. Thanks.
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Mar 14 2009, 09:34 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
Yeah it looks low in quality/blurry. Also the edges are a bit choppy. I think you're on the right track, but you just need some more practice. Good job though.
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Mar 14 2009, 09:40 PM
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Good job :)
I like the bitten part. |
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Mar 14 2009, 09:44 PM
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 /人◕‿‿◕人\ Group: Official Member Posts: 8,283 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 602,927 |
It looks more like posterize rape than a vector to me.
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Mar 14 2009, 10:57 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 1,288 Joined: Oct 2007 Member No: 585,380 |
i like it, but the leaf seems a little out of place.
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Mar 15 2009, 02:40 AM
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 This bitch better work! Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 13,681 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 28,095 |
i actually think it looks decent for your first time! much better than i have ever done. yay
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Mar 15 2009, 02:56 AM
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 (′ ･ω･｀) Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,179 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 72,477 |
i think it should be refered to as a vexel
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Mar 15 2009, 08:41 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 |
What's that white stuff near the left of the apple? O____o
Overall, I like the picture, but next time prz don't be blurry. |
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Mar 15 2009, 09:52 AM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
QUOTE(Beenly @ Mar 15 2009, 08:41 AM) What's that white stuff near the left of the apple? O____o Overall, I like the picture, but next time prz don't be blurry. Haha, it was supposed to be like that little shiny spot, but ehh. Thanks. I'll try my best next time to not make it so blurry.
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Mar 15 2009, 10:15 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,237 Joined: May 2008 Member No: 648,123 |
QUOTE(Beenly @ Mar 15 2009, 09:41 AM) What's that white stuff near the left of the apple? O____o it's mold, obviously. gosh! for your first vexel, spectacular job. i think for the future, though, you should focus on being a little steadier with the pen tool. if you hold down ALT and click on the last pick up point you made, it gets rid of the extra guide line that sometimes messes things up. |
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Mar 16 2009, 10:20 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
Other than the blurry edges and mismatched leaf that other people mention, it's pretty good. The light on the left side is a little funky, though.
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