untitled, can u help me out? |
untitled, can u help me out? |
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![]() <-[RaWR]-> ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 180 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 102,133 ![]() |
so heres my poem and i just need to title it.
and i want to know if any one understands it plz =] Undisputed but reputed distraught Standing with horizontal inevitability Chin up, head down, legs apart; execution Eyes distilled with diluted pungency A thrashed soul, a translucent massacre Besieged by the weight of 3 words Commencing perhaps redundant disaster Or the inauguration of two hearts concurred But vagueness has won yet again Evasive in its massive obscurity Too hard for effortless minds to comprehend So troubled by recurring insecurity And relentlessly from day to day I sway Probing, scrutinizing, revising each feature With waves of waterfall recoiling off my face My inundated heart sinks deeper and deeper Until days can no longer conceal night Nor can raved dreams refurbish my silhouette I’d sooner obliterate despair out of plight Then compel myself the indulgence to forget But if amnesty bares the fruits of forever And primaries are kept in youth Then it’s in tips of fingers, and lips of believers That perpetually lies the truth |
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Eternal Syn ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 ![]() |
It's okay. I just don't understand your first or last stanza. I also have no idea what you're writing about.
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