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 Mar 3 2009, 11:08 AM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots.  Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291  |
I was thinking of making a new website layout so I decided to just make a quick banner for the site to see if it would look nice. What do you think?
Somce C&C would be great. Thanks.  EDIT: Removed the text. |
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Mar 3 2009, 11:23 AM
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 Naomi loves you. Y'all may call me NaNa Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,925 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 427,774 |
I would fix the grammar and make the text smaller. Or I would make the box blank and code a text box in, so you can add links to your createblog page. Then it would be easier to go and make changes to the text. I would add more pop of color too, all the gray is kind of boring. That's the only thing.
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Mar 3 2009, 04:25 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 |
One of the layout picture/polaroid seems to be close to the text box.
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Mar 3 2009, 05:29 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
Execution-wise it's nice and clean, but the polaroids and brushes are a bit...cliche. Maybe you could try something a little different. Add some spice, you know?
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Mar 3 2009, 05:38 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
^Yeah, I realized that.
 What might you suggest?
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Mar 3 2009, 05:46 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
^Yeah, but I have only a bit of knowledge of Flash and I'm not even sure on what to make. *sigh*
I'll look into that though... |
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Mar 3 2009, 05:51 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
^Ok, cool. Well, send me a PM when you're ready and such but not right now because I've got tons of chores to do. Thanks.
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Mar 3 2009, 06:01 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 1,028 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 579,129 |
QUOTE(schizo @ Mar 3 2009, 05:29 PM)  Execution-wise it's nice and clean, but the polaroids and brushes are a bit...cliche. Maybe you could try something a little different. Add some spice, you know? I'm with Gabi on that. Err. I think the "{definition: awesome;}" part is kinda cheesy :p The stroke on some of the polaroids is a little pixelated. ..And again it's clean an neat, but nothing really pops out for me. |
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Mar 3 2009, 09:41 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
QUOTE(Beenly @ Mar 3 2009, 01:25 PM) One of the layout picture/polaroid seems to be close to the text box. Yeah I would move it over. Tbh, your polaroids don't look like polaroids. I think it's because of their shapes. Try & use an actual polaroid, one you find online, & just paste the screenshot in it. You'll probably have to crop some of your screenshots out though. Other than that, it's nice. :) |
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Mar 3 2009, 10:51 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 |
The definition awesome is cheesy, and I know its not part of thee design but for visitors the main thing they notice is the text and the actuall words they see need to be professional so work on the grammar like others said. And i was thinking maybe you should change whats in the top left polaroid cause since its so bright it contrasts.
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Mar 3 2009, 11:00 PM
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Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
Oh yeah I forgot to say that the polaroids are pixelated as well.
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