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Dont Break My Heart Vol1, Need advice on what to fix
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deteam
post Feb 8 2009, 02:33 PM
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Heres a little Mixtape cover i was working on . . just need some advice on what to fix . . and maybe what do add . . some feedback would be appreciated.



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Tried belnding it a little more and adding some depth . . watchu guys think?



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post Feb 8 2009, 02:36 PM
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I think it looks great! thumbsup.gif _smile.gif
 
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post Feb 8 2009, 02:40 PM
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I think it looks great!

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post Feb 8 2009, 02:40 PM
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QUOTE(ninjaBeenly @ Feb 8 2009, 02:40 PM) *
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post Feb 8 2009, 02:45 PM
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it looks good but it feels like something's missing. have you thought about increasing the font size of "subliminal gfx presents"?
 
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post Feb 8 2009, 02:51 PM
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QUOTE(Melie @ Feb 8 2009, 02:45 PM) *
it looks good but it feels like something's missing. have you thought about increasing the font size of "subliminal gfx presents"?


i was thinking that b.c. i played around with the size a bit but ive come to learn with mixtape covers that things like that are supposed 2 "be there" but not really "be there" lol like there suppossed to be small so u dnt notice them . . . but i guess i could make it bigger and see how it looks . . . any more suggestions? and thnks for the feedback guys appreciate it . . .

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post Feb 8 2009, 02:52 PM
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add red rings around her,
 
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post Feb 8 2009, 02:54 PM
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QUOTE(ninjaBeenly @ Feb 8 2009, 02:52 PM) *
add red rings around her,



any idea on how 2 do that lol . . . tutorial maybe? rolleyes.gif

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post Feb 8 2009, 04:23 PM
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QUOTE(Melie @ Feb 8 2009, 02:45 PM) *
it looks good but it feels like something's missing. have you thought about increasing the font size of "subliminal gfx presents"?


It's also not centered well.
 
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post Feb 8 2009, 05:16 PM
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Which software are you using? (PS, PSP, etc.)
 
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post Feb 8 2009, 06:34 PM
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ps cs3 . .

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post Feb 9 2009, 03:03 PM
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Ey a couple of other people i showed this to said i should add some depth, . . any of u guys have any ideas on how/what to for that ?

all feedback appreciated,

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post Feb 9 2009, 09:32 PM
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QUOTE(deteam @ Feb 8 2009, 11:54 AM) *
any idea on how 2 do that lol . . . tutorial maybe? rolleyes.gif

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http://www.createblog.com/tutorials/tutorial.php?id=1135

Yeah something's missing but I just don't know what it is, exactly. Like someone else said, it's not centered as well. I don't really think the picture goes with the whole theme. Like she's giving off a sexy, confident vibe while you're trying to send out a different message: heart break. Do you know what I mean? It's coming along though. thumbsup.gif
 
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post Feb 10 2009, 12:33 PM
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QUOTE(manny-the-dino @ Feb 9 2009, 09:32 PM) *
http://www.createblog.com/tutorials/tutorial.php?id=1135

Yeah something's missing but I just don't know what it is, exactly. Like someone else said, it's not centered as well. I don't really think the picture goes with the whole theme. Like she's giving off a sexy, confident vibe while you're trying to send out a different message: heart break. Do you know what I mean? It's coming along though. thumbsup.gif



haha if only the pen tool was my friend XD.gif

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