My mask, Poem |
 Jul 2 2004, 02:18 AM
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 Future Mr. Kelly Clarkson  Group: Member Posts: 1,268 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,552  |
wat do u think of this poem i wrote? ur honest opinion.
When I’m around people, I put up a mask, Smile, laughter and joy, But inside I feel like I’ve died. My soul tearing apart, My heart fragile like a piece of glass, Shattering into a million shards, And I cry inside, Being strong on the outside, Never to show my true feelings. I try and forget you, But you always Come back to my thoughts. Sadness consumes me, And I attain a feeling, That I am falling In an endless pit, Never being able to get out, Always stuck In my own abyss of sorrow. Consumed with hatred and envy, Seeing couples holding hands, Knowing That I will never have that with you, My heartaches with each smile u give, Like someone squeezing it Til it breaks. |
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Jul 2 2004, 02:20 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 205 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,755 |
here we go again.. slit ur rists...
lol j/k beautiful man. very beautiful. i like it 10/10 |
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Jul 2 2004, 06:23 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,831 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,324 |
Once again, another poem I can relate to.
It's awesome. |
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Jul 3 2004, 03:27 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,077 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,904 |
*sigh* This relates to me too....
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Jul 7 2004, 01:59 AM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
i gotta give u 9.999/10...just by one point...cause these poems reminded me of one of my best friend, bobby who had loved me for the last 3 years... it's like this is his feelings towards me...that poem so relates to him... dang u and bobby are like same or something?
 lol jk
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