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post Jul 1 2004, 10:43 PM
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yay u clicked happy.gif ...well i jus need a person who has time 2 read a story i have started (its only 14 pages so far) i really need an honest opinion!! i dont care if u hate as long as u tell me because i really wanna get dis book published...jus post yur email here if u do wanna read
 
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post Jul 1 2004, 10:51 PM
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ill do it,,, pinkstarburst08@hotmail.com cool.gif
 
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post Jul 1 2004, 10:56 PM
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Sure.
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post Jul 1 2004, 11:01 PM
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post Jul 1 2004, 11:02 PM
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email it to moi, swimgirlmb@yahoo.com
 
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post Jul 1 2004, 11:03 PM
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ill read it =) my email is
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post Jul 1 2004, 11:05 PM
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post Jul 1 2004, 11:15 PM
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ohmy.gif wow so many honest ppl!! haha thanx u guyz blush.gif
 
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post Jul 2 2004, 12:15 AM
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huh.gif ok u guys...u arent respondin...either yur slow readers or...or...iono tongue.gif
 
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post Jul 2 2004, 01:25 AM
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...lolx.. slow readers.. its all g
 
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post Jul 2 2004, 01:31 AM
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sure, i'll read it.. happy.gif

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post Jul 2 2004, 02:06 AM
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sure, i'll read it.. happy.gif

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hey there. i read your story. shifty.gif its very good! biggrin.gif i thought it was quite interesting. great story! happy.gif
 
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post Jul 2 2004, 03:24 AM
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i'll read it. jus email me at dani41790@Yahoo.com
 
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post Jul 2 2004, 03:58 AM
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Phatfarmsgirl_13@hotmail.com i want to read your story.
 
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post Jul 2 2004, 04:34 AM
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i'd like to read it souloving@sbcglobal.net _smile.gif
 
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post Jul 2 2004, 08:42 PM
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hey there. i read your story.  its very good!  i thought it was quite interesting. great story! 


happy.gif thanks!

oh n 2 those ppl who havent received it yet..i'm sendin it now...sorry for the delay _smile.gif
 
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post Jul 2 2004, 08:43 PM
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i wanna read it!!!!

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post Jul 2 2004, 09:00 PM
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i wanna read it!! plz and thank you. _smile.gif

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MisSyHangy
post Jul 2 2004, 09:50 PM
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..soOOo.. ::cough cough::.. hermz.. umm..
soOoo.. when are you gonna send me more of
the story?.. keke.. cuz i really like it..

or when is it gonna get publish...keke ^_^
 
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post Jul 2 2004, 10:10 PM
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me me me!!!!!!


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post Jul 2 2004, 10:17 PM
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im writing a story too. il probably ask some of you guys to read it once im half way done or something.
 
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post Jul 2 2004, 10:26 PM
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wat kind of story? o wells im gonna find out
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post Jul 2 2004, 10:47 PM
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OMGSHERSS u look like a totall VIN DIESEL FAN..well HELLOO SO AM IIII . i love him soooooo much. but ne wayz. sure ill be honest for yaaa heres my email

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post Jul 2 2004, 10:56 PM
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OMGSHERSS u look like a totall VIN DIESEL FAN..well HELLOO SO AM IIII . i love him soooooo much



laugh.gif oo cool!! vin diesel is sexay!! haha
 
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post Jul 2 2004, 11:09 PM
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e-mail me, I wanna read.

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post Jul 2 2004, 11:12 PM
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ill do it... but send it like 4 daiz later though... itz_soyoungy@hotmail.com
 
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post Jul 3 2004, 08:26 AM
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post Jul 3 2004, 03:11 PM
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so wat happens...wen yoohs are done can i read da rest? its good _smile.gif
 
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post Jul 3 2004, 03:20 PM
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That was a really good story. happy.gif
Nice job!
 
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post Jul 3 2004, 03:28 PM
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post Jul 3 2004, 03:41 PM
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i read it. its pretty goood but there are so bad things to it. its a little too choppy. make the sentences flow better.
 
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post Jul 3 2004, 04:48 PM
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mememe! petermai3000@hotmail.com biggrin.gif
 
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post Jul 3 2004, 04:53 PM
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Haha, I was just wandering around and I see this and I look at how many pages it has.. and think, "Wow... so many honest people, huh?" Haha. I don't check my email anymore. *shrugs*
 
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post Jul 3 2004, 05:25 PM
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i wanna read, x__kristina@hotmail.com
 
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post Jul 3 2004, 06:20 PM
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i read it. its pretty goood but there are so bad things to it. its a little too choppy. make the sentences flow better.



thanks! that helped me a lot happy.gif
 
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post Jul 5 2004, 04:04 AM
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post Jul 6 2004, 08:59 PM
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post Jul 6 2004, 09:07 PM
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i write a lot of stories too and when i show them to friends it takes them eternity to read, and once they give it back they're like "oh it was great"

email me at x_aznlady_x@yahoo.com and ill read it and crtique it biggrin.gif
 
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post Jul 6 2004, 09:12 PM
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i wanna read it!! white_girl53@hotmail.com
 
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post Jul 6 2004, 09:19 PM
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Here, send it to me:

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post Jul 6 2004, 09:23 PM
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ya i'll read it inspyrie@msn.com
 
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post Jul 6 2004, 09:30 PM
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all these replys saying it was good.. i wanna read!!!

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post Jul 7 2004, 10:20 AM
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post Jul 7 2004, 11:44 AM
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OKAY GUYS. SINCE THERE ARE A LOT OF HONEST PEOPLE, IF U POST AFTER ME YOU MIGHT NOT RECIEVE THE STORY BECAUSE I AM CURRENTLY WORKING ON IT. happy.gif THANK YOU
 
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post Jul 7 2004, 11:48 AM
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what's the story about?? count me it.. siyutiayee@hotmail.com _smile.gif
 
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post Jul 7 2004, 12:07 PM
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i'll read it--

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post Jul 7 2004, 01:35 PM
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why don't you just post it on here.. and then keep adding when you get more finished?! i think its really good.. is this a true story?! i think it would make a great soap opera!!

will you send meeh the rest when you finish it up.. please please i wanna kno the ending!!
 
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post Jul 7 2004, 02:08 PM
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wow thats long but ill read it to the emil is in my profile
 
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post Jul 7 2004, 08:52 PM
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What special 'bout da story, hm....... ok i want read it, i think its nice coz all people want to read so i want....
I will read it mine is :
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post Jul 7 2004, 09:33 PM
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oohhh i wana read it lol
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post Jul 7 2004, 11:41 PM
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post Jul 8 2004, 12:03 AM
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ill read it...
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post Jul 8 2004, 10:49 AM
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my old friend had me read her story (i even edited it!)i think she might get i published, but i havent talked to her in forever! ill read it my email is dumblonde101@hotmail.com
 
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post Jul 8 2004, 05:46 PM
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laugh.gif i wuna read it!!!

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biggrin.gif which eva u wunt
 
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post Jul 8 2004, 05:52 PM
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post Jul 8 2004, 06:34 PM
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post Jul 8 2004, 10:39 PM
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post Jul 8 2004, 10:42 PM
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I'm up to read anything!!

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post Jul 8 2004, 10:45 PM
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I'll read it!! happy.gif

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post Jul 8 2004, 11:48 PM
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alrighty then, id be happy to read it =]
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post Jul 9 2004, 10:41 AM
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wow its really good. i'm sending you a file attachment of your story and some suggestions of mine so don't think its like a virus or anything. lol. so if you see Christina or xbittersweetbabyx then thats me. oh and I hope you have Microsoft Words.
 
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post Jul 9 2004, 02:14 PM
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i wanna read! =]
 
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post Jul 9 2004, 03:03 PM
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oooh! i'd love to read it :]

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post Jul 9 2004, 03:06 PM
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Okay sure. E-mail awayyyy =D

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post Jul 10 2004, 02:32 AM
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Sure why not, i'm a writer too, i can give some suggestions... happy.gif
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post Jul 10 2004, 01:03 PM
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post Jul 10 2004, 04:27 PM
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post Jul 10 2004, 11:09 PM
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ooo ooo!!! me too!!! laugh.gif

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post Jul 10 2004, 11:37 PM
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moving to writing.
 
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post Jul 11 2004, 12:54 AM
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yay i'm so excited to read this! _smile.gif
 
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post Jul 13 2004, 04:45 PM
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laugh.gif yay i love stories!!!

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post Jul 13 2004, 05:03 PM
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post Jul 13 2004, 09:06 PM
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i wud luv 2 here it

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post Jul 14 2004, 12:24 AM
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post Jul 14 2004, 02:29 AM
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wow great story. man ur a realli gud writer. umm r u gna send the rest of the story though?
 
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post Jul 20 2004, 07:10 PM
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she never sent it to me _dry.gif
 
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post Jul 22 2004, 10:35 PM
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ooh sorry if i didnt send it 2 u...ahh my bad...iono if u still wanna read it


its 131 pages now blink.gif
 
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post Jul 23 2004, 09:33 AM
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ooo, thats a hecka lotta pages, but ima try and read it neway!
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post Jul 26 2004, 08:44 AM
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post Jul 29 2004, 11:53 PM
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GUYZ ITZ A 167 PAGES NOW AND I JUST CANNOT SEND THAT MUCH OVA THA INTERNET. SORRY GUYS I DONT NEED ANYMORE HONEST PEOPLE.
 
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post Aug 20 2004, 10:53 PM
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post Dec 27 2005, 01:41 AM
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Sure; I'm up for a good read. Email: ignorance.calls@hotmail.com
 
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