A Love Poem, called Goodbye |
 Jul 1 2004, 07:58 PM
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 Clinically Insane!!  Group: Member Posts: 24 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,734  |
Goodbye
When it all comes down to this A short goodbye and one last kiss A smile appears A smile that came to hide the tears It was God's art Two people with only one heart A desicion that was thought to be made for the better Was wrong because they still wanted to be together But neither said a word So not a single thought was heard With fears of bringing back memories They changed their locks and threw away old keys They burned old clothes Dried their tears and wiped their nose And as they stood to walk away They prayed and asked God for a brand new day And they went to bed that night with their heads held high They promised themselves they weren't going to cry Lying lonely in their beds As old images played back in their heads They thought to themselves, Looks like tomorrow's just going to be another bad day If the pain from tonight just won't go away. |
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Jul 2 2004, 01:59 AM
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Wow.. I like that.. depressing though..
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Jul 2 2004, 02:09 AM
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oh god ok every one pull out ur razors and slit ur rists....
(just kidding) the poem was beautiful i enjoyed it very much but yes, it is depressing lol |
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Jul 2 2004, 07:07 AM
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depressing love poems...
 ^ as for TU SHO, I cannot slit my wrists. I hate blood. Poem was awesome btw. |
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Jul 2 2004, 07:22 AM
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 i`m in love & always will be Group: Member Posts: 1,138 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 12,769 |
The poem was amazing =) I'm feeling alot like that right now
keep up the good work |
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Jul 2 2004, 10:23 AM
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Awesome awesome awesome poem...Good stuff
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Jul 2 2004, 04:58 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
wow...really good how long did it take you to find words that ryhme w/ it? and it's depressing yes...but good nonetheless
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Jul 2 2004, 05:48 PM
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grrowl Group: Member Posts: 393 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,727 |
wow..
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Jul 2 2004, 06:01 PM
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 old school member Group: Member Posts: 1,796 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 843 |
That's good...really good.
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Jul 2 2004, 08:46 PM
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Clinically Insane!! Group: Member Posts: 24 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,734 |
QUOTE(Cloud_X @ Jul 2 2004, 5:58 PM) wow...really good how long did it take you to find words that ryhme w/ it? and it's depressing yes...but good nonetheless haha actually..the words came to me..especialy when I was laying in my bed. I was like HEY! I turned on a light and jumped out of bed to finish the rest. It wasn't exactly finding words that rhymed...It was finidng verses to go with the flow. and fank you guys  for all the kinnddd words and compliemts you've been leavin me 
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Jul 2 2004, 11:03 PM
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 1'm h3r3! h0ll4! Group: Member Posts: 185 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,207 |
i really like that poem.......that's depressing......BRAVO BRAVO!!!!!!
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Jul 3 2004, 02:11 AM
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wow... i like it a lot.. i bet lotsa ppl can relate to that
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Jul 3 2004, 03:20 AM
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That's so good. It's so depressing.. And reminds me of my first love....
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Jul 5 2004, 09:50 PM
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 blah blah Group: Member Posts: 196 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,277 |
hey that is a nice poem... but it makes me sad
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Jul 7 2004, 01:42 AM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
awww that relates with me and my ex...wen were breaking up. awww that's sucha cute poem! and u made that? awww!
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