Theres nothing left to say, something i made out of the blue |
 Jul 1 2004, 03:27 PM
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Hey guys i wrote this while i was bored today... I personally like it but what do you guys think
Its just been so hard Making sense of why we had to part. I remember those times Seeing you with elegant eyes Saying lines of love that made you cry You were special to me Only you could make me feel so happy U told me you'd love me forever and a day Man was it hard when you walked away... Even now I still miss you Going about my day thinking of times that used to. And now all is left and gone Nothing left to say but I miss you megan...Forever and a day |
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Jul 2 2004, 07:07 AM
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wow... that was beautiful.
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Jul 7 2004, 02:21 AM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
awww that's so sad that u guys broke up and all...and thats sucha cute poem!! spelled out as miss you megan...aww!! nice job! gived me tears...well lil
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Jul 7 2004, 02:23 AM
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 What the fack. Group: Official Member Posts: 6,164 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,519 |
An acrostic poem and it rhymes! Wonderful. That is so sweet.
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