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Please critique my second layout!
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yamimasago
post Dec 9 2008, 09:33 PM
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Hello, my name is Andy and I'm new to coding. This is my second layout and I'm interested in what others think of it. Don't hesitate to criticize and thanks for your time. In addition, I would like to know if there's anyway to add music to blogger layouts; I observed that music players from sites like Imeem have skins that don't fit well into layouts.

Reason for edit: please thumb large images. thanks :) -nat
 
 
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manny-the-dino
post Dec 9 2008, 09:36 PM
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Wow, it's really good if this is your second layout. I like the simplicity of it. Great job. flowers.gif
 
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post Dec 9 2008, 09:38 PM
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Thanks!
 
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post Dec 9 2008, 09:43 PM
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I think it looks really cool. The brown and blue, oddly enough, work ok together.
 
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post Dec 9 2008, 11:00 PM
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post Dec 9 2008, 11:29 PM
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I actually really like it! It's simple, and it's clean. Good job!
 
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post Dec 9 2008, 11:30 PM
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I like the two colors. Pretty good for second layout.
 
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post Dec 15 2008, 08:32 PM
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My only problem is that im really tired of people putting text into the layout.

Like I would use it but It says winter days.

If it was just the image it would be much better.
 
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post Dec 17 2008, 01:26 PM
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iunno...personally its not for me.
but im shore others have/will love it.

im more for kinda abstract/cartooney/etc kinda layouts.
the colors are nice but im a big fan of blues, but i also really dont like the text--it seems randomly placed.
 
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post Dec 18 2008, 08:01 AM
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i really love how simple but awesome this layout is
and its REALLY good for your second layout :O

well done, keep up the good work :D
 
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post Dec 18 2008, 11:46 AM
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Its a really nice layout! And you can use myflashfetish.com for music players they have simple little ones where you can use just colors that match your layout [:

Kudos
 
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post Jan 1 2009, 06:50 PM
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Thanks for the suggestions! Btw, Happy new years
 
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post Jan 2 2009, 03:52 AM
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I like your layout :D

I do agree that the text 'winter days' is slightly annoying, but only because it automatically makes the layout themed. I the text wasn't there, the layout would just be this cool wintry style, but it wouldn't be labeled as wintry; people would be free to interpret it as they pleased.
 
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post Jan 3 2009, 12:42 AM
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I love it!
 
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post Jan 3 2009, 06:33 PM
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awh it seems simplee and nice (:! heh very good :] kudos to your second layout!
 
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post Jan 3 2009, 06:45 PM
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Very well done! _smile.gif But, yeah, maybe if you could remove the text or make it somehow, idk, "blend" into the layout, it'll look much better.
 
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post Jan 13 2009, 04:41 PM
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it's neat, organized, and looks good. 10/10 c:
 

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