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Inevitable
Dabme
post Nov 26 2008, 06:03 AM
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My soul Oh how it aches for you

-and fingers an aura of attraction

For you forever is not long enough

-and eternity too short for passion

So now I lay, so long I do in life and death alike

But tonight I pray for heaven's sake

-that ropes and knots are tight

For if I were to wander off; and I beg my conscience not

Then earth and sky can minimize

-my flesh beneath the rock
 
 
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*Janette*
post Dec 1 2008, 11:44 PM
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I thought the first line was slightly corny but the rest of it I like a lot. It has a good flow. :)
 

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