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pyoon
post Jun 30 2004, 07:01 PM
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I heard something vaguely similar but I wrote this one.

There was this couple. And they fell greatly in love the first day they laid eyes on each other. A couple of weeks before their wedding date, they went to a fortuneteller and sought their future. The fortuneteller warned them not to get married for their relationship will not last. The bond the two lovers had made was so strong that they ignored what the teller for warned. Two months after the marriage the husband died of a car accident. And a week later, the wife committed suicide due to the grief. At the scene of the suicide the wife left a note to the fortuneteller saying, “You believed that our love will be cut short due to his departure of this world, but I will follow him to the heavens.”

Honestly, what a dumb wife. If I was the husband, I'd like my wife to live a happy life on earth. And she'd most likely go to hell for commiting suicide. Selfish girl... tongue.gif
 
 
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*NatiMarie*
post Jun 30 2004, 07:02 PM
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Aww that's sweet...
Cliche, but sweet
=)
 
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post Jun 30 2004, 07:02 PM
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QUOTE(NaTiMaRiE @ Jun 30 2004, 8:02 PM)
Aww that's sweet...
Cliche, but sweet
=)

Took it out from my mouth. hammer.gif
 
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post Jun 30 2004, 07:02 PM
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aww well i read this somewhere before. this belongs in writing, not lounge, so moving it. _smile.gif

anyways,
WHAT?!??! "너무 뜨거운"
wow... must be a bit on the... self-confident side laugh.gif jkjk.
 
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post Jun 30 2004, 07:21 PM
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omg peter that was so sweet cry.gif







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post Jun 30 2004, 07:26 PM
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peter will you marry me. anyways that would sweet..it melted me.
 
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QUOTE(pyoon @ Jun 30 2004, 7:01 PM)
Honestly, what a dumb wife. If I was the husband, I'd like my wife to live a happy life on earth. And she'd most likely go to hell for commiting suicide. Selfish girl... tongue.gif

haha, your funny. what sweet people we have at CB here. write more, melt more girls hearts!
 
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post Jul 4 2004, 11:29 PM
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That was realli sweet.. it sounded exactly like the plot for this one movie.. erm.. i forget what its called, but that's exactly what happened.. except that the husband and wife were soulmates or something, so the husband went to hell and rescued her
 
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post Jul 4 2004, 11:39 PM
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That would be a Greek myth... Orpheus I believe. I forgot the girl's name. Search for it. Of course, Greek myths never end happily. Orpheus is weak, turns back to look at hell one last time, and is turned into stone forever. Puny mortals!
 
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post Jul 5 2004, 01:29 AM
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That would be a Greek myth... Orpheus I believe. I forgot the girl's name. Search for it. Of course, Greek myths never end happily. Orpheus is weak, turns back to look at hell one last time, and is turned into stone forever. Puny mortals!

Well the myth is similar, but not that much
 
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post Jul 5 2004, 02:31 PM
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That's pretty sweet .. but weird .. o.O
 
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post Jul 7 2004, 02:08 AM
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lOL!! and u wrote that... and u say it's pretty dumb cause she is selfish haha^^;; ur funny peter haha newais hmm... i dont believe in fortunetellers... cause they are like evil spirit wannabes...so yeah hehe but wow they actually die haha
 
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post Jul 7 2004, 03:36 PM
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awwss...lol
 
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post Jul 7 2004, 05:07 PM
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i like "girl found dead" better. hehe

*SHAMELESS SELF-PROMOTIOM*
 
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post Jul 7 2004, 08:44 PM
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i like "girl found dead" better. hehe

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ahahaha xDDD


that story was relle sad -___-;;
 
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post Jul 8 2004, 03:22 PM
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It was sad, yes, but like Natimarie said, very cliche.
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