masquerade, by xpaper_heartsx |
 Jun 29 2004, 01:49 AM
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 Newbie  Group: Member Posts: 9 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,598  |
.masquerade.
we're so guilty, even Shakespeare won't save us. every frantic kiss and desperate fumble for sanity is just a cover up; honey we both know that this dark bedroom is simply an excuse for the inevitable. seven am and the tv's still on; we've used up the whole night and i'll be d(tos)ed if i'm gonna let you wake up holding me. well the fall from your window is awfully tempting, and even your pretty eyes can't keep me here, lovely. what a saccharine suicide; i'll make it quick. |
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Jun 29 2004, 02:43 PM
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 LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
aaw wow. i like it
especially the last 6 lines. very every time i die-ish |
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Jun 29 2004, 05:33 PM
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Newbie Group: Member Posts: 9 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,598 |
thanks...it's not one of my best... but thanks anyways
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Jul 7 2004, 02:29 AM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
ooo nice poem! keep up the good work...but it's it just me or am i stupid... i was thinking that poem is some kind of like a sex related poem O_O;; haha but nvm haha or is it >.<;;;;
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Jul 9 2004, 09:53 AM
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I am Sandy. Hear me roar. Group: Member Posts: 1,152 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,896 |
i love your poem, its really really good, keep up the good work :)
QUOTE ooo nice poem! keep up the good work...but it's it just me or am i stupid... i was thinking that poem is some kind of like a sex related poem O_O;; haha but nvm haha or is it >.<;;;; thats what i thought ^_^;; |
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Jul 9 2004, 12:02 PM
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 Kermit the frog = <3 Group: Member Posts: 2,315 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,215 |
nice poem.
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Jul 9 2004, 08:35 PM
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 off the wall dork Group: Member Posts: 470 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 19,070 |
geez that is such a good poem... i like it a lot
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