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 Jun 28 2004, 06:26 PM
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 I have 6 blue blocks :3  Group: Member Posts: 2,248 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 14,959  |
okay, post your haikus!
a haiku is a poem with 5 syllables on the first line, 7 on the secound, and 5 on the third. and haikus are about nature. example: every now and then the clouds breaks apart, showing a lost world of blue. ::jerry:: |
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Jun 29 2004, 03:14 PM
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 Kermit the frog = <3 Group: Member Posts: 2,315 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,215 |
the wind blows at leaves
vunerable and fragile falling, dead.. empty heh. how's that? |
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Jul 7 2004, 02:33 AM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
my heart gently falls apart
deep into pieces like how the icicles break hmm is this ok? haha dang am i sad right now?  
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Jul 7 2004, 02:36 AM
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What a sad story...
A shunned boy who's name was "Oh shit, here he comes". |
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Jul 7 2004, 02:41 AM
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 Look its... Group: Official Member Posts: 5,817 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,767 |
there was a topic on haikus already.. butoh well. i have no idea how to make a haiku. i dont get it
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Jul 7 2004, 03:02 AM
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 LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
mathiew is a jerk
he thinks that he is so cool he peed on the couch one hundred bottles of beer on the wall, one hund- red bottles of beer |
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Jul 7 2004, 08:01 PM
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 i`m in love & always will be Group: Member Posts: 1,138 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 12,769 |
my exboyfriend sucks
he lied and cheated on me i still like him though |
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Jul 7 2004, 08:03 PM
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 s a r a h r o s e <3 Group: Member Posts: 575 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 12,944 |
aw im so sry :( get bettaz
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Jul 7 2004, 08:25 PM
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 Random Rei =) Group: Member Posts: 456 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,490 |
it's all because of
you. i'm feeling sad and blue. i'm dead like a rose. i suck rite???
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Jul 8 2004, 03:27 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,102 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,162 |
Writing my haiku,
Keeping count on my fingers, Which means I can't type. Aren't these supposed to- Describe nature's majesty Um, fingers are nice? ^^^pathetic attempts at haiku |
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Jul 9 2004, 01:14 PM
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Kermit the frog = <3 Group: Member Posts: 2,315 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,215 |
QUOTE(Idyll @ Jul 8 2004, 3:27 PM) Writing my haiku, Keeping count on my fingers, Which means I can't type. Aren't these supposed to- Describe nature's majesty Um, fingers are nice? ^^^pathetic attempts at haiku heheh.. those are good |
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Jul 9 2004, 01:21 PM
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 Dark Lord of McCandless Group: Member Posts: 2,226 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,761 |
My lunar death ray
Frightens the people of Earth Mua ha ha ha ha |
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Jul 10 2004, 08:44 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,634 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,631 |
QUOTE(ComradeRed @ Jul 9 2004, 1:21 PM) My lunar death ray Frightens the people of Earth Mua ha ha ha ha ahahahha that's funny hahahah. |
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Jul 10 2004, 08:46 PM
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 <3<3<3<3 Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 3,177 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,779 |
my room was messy.
my mom told me to clean it, and now i am grounded. *bows* 
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Jul 10 2004, 09:57 PM
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 Aww! ^___^ Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,645 |
Let the flower grow
There is a beauty inside Waiting to be seen |
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Jul 10 2004, 09:59 PM
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Aww! ^___^ Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,645 |
I won the haiku contest in my school vs. the japanese school. YAY! But, that was LOOONNGGG time ago. I don't even remember the Haiku I used.
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Jul 10 2004, 10:07 PM
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i`m in love & always will be Group: Member Posts: 1,138 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 12,769 |
^ congrats on winning
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Jul 10 2004, 10:25 PM
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Aww! ^___^ Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,645 |
thankyou!
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Jul 12 2004, 02:08 PM
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 !shobe! Group: Member Posts: 664 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 5,912 |
the cold sharp metal
pressing against my pale skin blood is all i see |
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Jul 12 2004, 02:16 PM
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Dark Lord of McCandless Group: Member Posts: 2,226 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,761 |
The only problem
with Haiku is that you just get started and then |
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Jul 12 2004, 05:14 PM
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 Paid da coss 2 B da boss Group: Member Posts: 28 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,914 |
i never heard about the sylable rule. But kno haikus aren't supose to rhyme!!!!!
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Jul 13 2004, 07:53 PM
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Aww! ^___^ Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,645 |
PEOPLE!! Haiku's are suppose to be about nature!! and its suppose to be deep.
Here's my Haiku: Let the flower grow There is a beauty inside Waiting to be seen It means don't just judge anybody until you get to know them. |
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