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A New Piece, For My BYW "Show"
Tramatize
post Jun 24 2008, 06:25 PM
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Tell me what you think of this -

I made this for a wrestling team/show whatever you want to call it that i manage.
Is it good or not, and how can i improve?

Any kind of feedback is appriciated thumbsup.gif
 
 
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mizzkewl06
post Jun 24 2008, 06:30 PM
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the words seem to be too dark and match the background making it difficult to read but other than that i think it's looks ok. i like the little cut & tear effects you have going on! happy.gif
 
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post Jun 24 2008, 08:43 PM
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QUOTE(mizzkewl06 @ Jun 24 2008, 04:30 PM) *
the words seem to be too dark and match the background making it difficult to read but other than that i think it's looks ok. i like the little cut & tear effects you have going on! happy.gif


Yeah, it took me awhile to be able to read what the writing said. Other than the font not being too readable, it's pretty good.
 
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post Jun 25 2008, 01:23 PM
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It has a nice grunge feel (if that was what you were going for) but the text is a bit hard to read. I like the falling person at the far left. laugh.gif
 
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post Jun 25 2008, 01:35 PM
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Thanks for all the positive feed back so far! =)
with the words i was trying to make the background the focus but have the CTW be noticeable, with the Cut Throat Wrestling in black at the bottom, i was trying to make that there but not noticeable, but i thought you could read that CTW fine.
 
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post Jun 25 2008, 03:39 PM
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"CTW" is okay to read. I can see "Cut Throat Wresting" when I highlight the picture (which is kinda interesting) but not otherwise.

I like the grungyness and tears, and the silhouette of the jumping guy. It looks a little plain in certain areas (bottom left side ish and above "CTW"); I would suggesting adding stuff there or moving the text up so that the guy is on the left of the text? But then that would decrease the effect of the guy jumping, so hmm. It's up to you, really. I like what you have going on, though. Nice job. :]
 
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post Jul 1 2008, 05:18 PM
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It is very nice. I like it but Its too hard to read...
 

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