"Love,let it go", a gushy poem O,O |
 Jun 22 2008, 12:25 PM
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From that first moment when lips touched,
Feelings went through me that I can’t hold inside But now something has changed within you Your heart is somewhere else So now if I really love you I have to let you go No matter how I feel No matter where I stand No matter where and when my heart wants to go I won’t let myself ruin you Something I cannot do We stood on the same side Hand n’ hand but now I have to understand If I love something I have to let it go I have to let you go |
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Jul 24 2008, 01:48 PM
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you really have a powerful emotion in your poems. i like the style and am no expert but think you have talent
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Jul 25 2008, 12:15 AM
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GREAKAZOID RCDcrewmember MODLION 1st class MODPIGGY 2nd class... Group: Member Posts: 211 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 624,214 |
Thanks again for reading it. =D
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Jul 26 2008, 04:31 PM
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That is EXACTLY why I broke up with my ex.
It's incredible really. |
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Jul 27 2008, 07:08 PM
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GREAKAZOID RCDcrewmember MODLION 1st class MODPIGGY 2nd class... Group: Member Posts: 211 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 624,214 |
Yeah know what you mean.
Thanks for reading =] |
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